Holy crap this is ridiculous
"The number one Prime Warrior of Tianliang Civilization!"
Eastern · Beacon Immortal
You have a great story but you consistently ruin the immersion
Don’t understand why they go straight for the kill instead of diplomacy. Imagine winning the native species to your side?
"Since the 24th of August, when Yu Jinghe ventured alone into the 'Area 67' on the outskirts of Ming Mountain, there has been no message back. We can only confirm that he's still alive but impossible to contact," Luo Chan said with a wry smile: "Soon after, starting from the 27th of August, one of the Three Great Beast Emperors from Ming Mountain, the 'Heavenly Serpent Beast Emperor', and its myriad Flying Heaven Level Exotic Beasts began a frenzied assault on us and the Tianliang Civilization."
Eastern · Beacon Immortal
I love how it goes from most flying heaven are at stage 5 to most are high stage 6
A vast number of Flying Heaven Peak Martial Artists are trapped at this step.
Eastern · Beacon Immortal
FUCK! This degree thing is so annoying! Put it back to level
Stop changing shit please, it ruins the immersion
[Life Level: 27.7 degrees (Second Order)]
Eastern · Beacon Immortal
Jesus Christ it’s not hard to put parentheses
<<Yu... Mentor Yu.>> Li Yuan was somewhat bewildered as he looked at the group before him.
Eastern · Beacon Immortal
You are literally robbing your readers
Tame the beasts
If there were only a few, it wouldn't mean much, but if there were many inside Flying Serpent Valley, it would indicate that this place was very suitable for cultivating the Blood-Activating Origin Lingzhi mushrooms, and that would be completely different... If the Seven Stars human civilization occupied this place and could use technological methods, they could completely cultivate and plant them in large quantities.
Eastern · Beacon Immortal
Great and unique story! My only issue is the inconsistency in the formatting and translation. It consistently ruins the immersion of the story and makes reading many chapters miserable. Hopefully the author can fix those chapters. Here is one example: (2 sentences) ‘’ “ (Two sentences) “ “ And it will be like this out of no where in the middle of a chapter or for a few chapters. Those chapters feel like scams cause you make us waste our coins for less than half the content of a typical chapter.
High-Level Martial Era
Eastern · Beacon Immortal