pothos

pothos

male LV 14

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2018-03-16 đã tham gia United States
Huy hiệu 18

Moments 92
pothos
pothos
3 days ago
Posted

The kid seems mc is a good guy but not. Excessively steals. He is smart but an idiot. His first hook up he plays the paramour. MC seems like he will be crazy op. When the author gave him a weakness (mana) he immediately gave him a work around. Gramatically the story is fine. I just think the story isnt for me.

pothos
pothos
3 days ago
Commented

Fine if you don’t multiple partners but trashing one in front of the other not cool.

"You know you have a godly dick that every girl expects of her partner. just look at Jin his dick is only 5 inches long but you, even though you are just turned 15 years old but still have an 8-inch long little monster, You really know how to impress me," Big Sis Maya said while grabbing my little brother.

Cheat Awakening ( Rewritten )

Cheat Awakening ( Rewritten )

Fantasy · kuru_patel

pothos
pothos
22 days ago
Commented

This is the equaivant of a dragon ball z power up episode. The plot on how ability works that the MC doesn’t know plus potentially useless info for us. Thankfully the book doesn’t have too many chapters like this

pothos
pothos
25 days ago
Replied to Spic1503

Thanks for the review. I like kingdom building. I have been having a hard time finding something I really like lately because there is an outcry of support for op. Which just isn’t my cup of tea. I guess back to the good old library

pothos
pothos
1 months ago
Commented

2 paragraphs and flushed out a side character plus village vibe nice

Now seeing that Lu Qing had indeed recovered, she sincerely felt happy.

I Can See Through All Things' Information

I Can See Through All Things' Information

Eastern · King of Salted Fish

pothos
pothos
1 months ago
Commented

When people are struggling themselves it can be hard to ask them burden themselves. Ask yourself, are you fostering children? How much disposable income is going to charity. Most of us are a little selfish

To her dismay, her own man came back saying he wanted to adopt Little Yan, claiming that during a previous famine when everyone fled the village together, the Lu family's patriarch had been kind to him and he couldn't stand to see his last bloodline go uncared for.

I Can See Through All Things' Information

I Can See Through All Things' Information

Eastern · King of Salted Fish

pothos
pothos
1 months ago
Replied to HADE_Thoppil

The more you know about bugs. The harder it is to read this. It breaks my immersion. Similar to when the forever alones write ‘healthy’ relationship dynamics or se**al relationships. I agree besides that decent premise

pothos
pothos
1 months ago
Commented

The note here will keep me going

pothos
pothos
1 months ago
Replied to Orsted_sama

I read this review. And in general I thing the psychosis and the reasons for the behaviors are probably a little too far a part. Cause for the mc psyche seems a little slower for development but at least it’s seems like a set up for character progression and not just edgelording

pothos
pothos
1 months ago
Posted

I haven’t go to the super pro China stuff. After all free chapters: it reads a little like a lit novel that could be made into anime. MC gets hired to work as a ‘profit’ in another world. The premise is new even if the smart phone in another world aspect is a little over done. It at least feels fresh. World seems consistent