Veasna

Was such a good and promising story! Why did it end like this? Just omg she made explosive and everyone surrenders so now the world is peaceful. What happened to the crown prince? What about you he traitors? What about the third prince and consort de? It’s like the author decided not to write the story anymore and hurried up to just conclude it as quickly as possible.

So disappointed. The sorry had a good plot at first. And the mc has a good personality. But why does it seems like every time he sees a pretty girl, he’s on the verge of falling in love even when he has a girlfriend. And what is up with him pretending to be other girls boyfriend when he is dating someone. Sorry the incoherent story line and character is causing me to drop this story.

Still hoping for an update.

I am beginning to suspect that she isn’t related to the Yun family. The more I think about it I feel that the President’s daughter is the real daughter of the Yun. She seems to have the same personality as the mom and sister of Yun Xi.

I don’t think it’s the translation that is the problem. I think the author forgot who was killed earlier. Sima Kai dead on the way back to the clan after the devil mouse died. Sima You Ke was killed by Thousand Reson ance during the three year deadline. Sima Ke (who was Sima You Ke’s grandfather) was blown to pieces by Halycon. Sima Yi was also killed shortly after by Halycon even after the ancestor asked for mercy. The only one that they didn’t mention died was Sima You Yi who also abused her family with Sima You Ke. But it was also mention that Sima Ke brought Sima You Yi and left after Sima Jun was cured. So the author forgot that Sima Ke was supposed to be dead already. Then this chapter mentioned that Sima Ke and how he didn’t level much after going to Dongyue to bring Sima Lie and the others back. So it’s the writer’s problem that they forgot the character deaths. Logically it should be Sima You Yi who brought their branch to flee and then confronting Sima You Yue and trying to get revenge for his grandfather’s death. Also another thing that doesn’t make sense is that You Yue wanted to kill Sima You Ke for abusing her grandfather and mention that anyone who did deserve death. So shouldn’t Sima You Yi die at that time for the same reason as Sima You Ke? But if that happened then their is no fleeing from the clan and there will not be this chapter. I don’t really mind the pronoun he/she for You Yue since she is suppose to be a male to everyone else. So the probably just treat her as a guy so they will not notice how they address her since they are suppose to keep it a secret anyway. I’m more confused with the storyline that forgets the plot already written after a few chapters.

He shows up towards the end of the book. He’s the god emmissary that came to different world to recruit gods of different world into the god world. He showed up pretty much after the battle and told Jun Wu Xie that she needs to be the god of this world to fix what the lord of the upper realm did and also that Jun Wu Yao that he was punished to this realm to redeem himself by helping. He also told Jun Wu Xie that she was a god emmisary herself in her past life (when she went and taught the Lord God and the Devil how to create the world). Because the god realm can’t interfere in different world’s conflict they had Jun Wu Xie reborn into the current world so that she can take care of the Lord of the Upper realm (also the war god of the current world).

Wrong chapter? There is the same chapter later.

Umm what happened to Reo being to scared of being betrayed to start a relationship or fall in love? Didn’t his brother and sister tell him he would understand about giving ppl a second chance after he fell in love? And since when did Elena know about their relationship? So random to throw that i their. It would have made more sense if he fell in love with his boyfriend after talking to his sister and hearing from his twin about how much he regret not giving his ex a second chance before her death.

Did the author forget about the details that they wrote in the earlier chapters? 1. It was said earlier that she fell in love with Luke when she was younger and was visiting Selly. ( Luke is her first love) 2. She was in a relationship in high school and Lisa reminisce about her young miss coming home with blooming flowers all around her but she knew that the boyfriend is a scumbag. 3. When they broke up it was because her boyfriend cheated on her with her best friend (although it didn’t mention who). He brought the new girlfriend to Elena’s birthday party. 4. They twins remembered seeing their sister coming home crying and the locking herself in her bedroom. Saying that everyone abandoned her. Mostly avout her parents but it was mentioned that she said “He even dared to cheat on me” “He betrayed me with my best friend.” 5. It was also written that she fell in love with Luke again after her breakup when she saw him feeding some kittens or cats. And her love grew after seeing him repeatedly helping animals. 6. It was also said that she fell in love with Luke again so quickly and so much that it seems like her relationship with her boyfriend in high school never existed. Because she was just continuing her first love. So in conclusion, this is getting confusing. She is trying to clarify her relationship with her ex. But it became, contradicting to the story that was written earlier. 1. Her excuse is I was blackmail to be his girlfriend when he caught me stalking you. 2. She said that she saw him helping animals and fell in love so she started to stalk him. ( But she didn’t see him again and fell in love until after her breakup ) 3. She said that she’s loved him from the beginning before she was blackmail. And that she only had a little affection for her ex when they were dating. ( I don’t buy it. You have affection for your blackmailer? Stockholm Syndrome?) 4. The reason for her breaking up with her boyfriend is that she was one of many. They had fights about it many times. When he got angry she “beat him up?” (Seriously? You beat someone because they got angry at you? That is so out of character. 5. When he couldn’t accept her beating him and tried to hit her, Lisa beat him up and then they turned and walked away. (So cheating on her with her best friend and coming to her birthday party with his new girlfriend before even breaking up with her was not even mentioned? Why does it seem like that this was written without a plotline planned? Previously, when Luke told Elena that he never loved Miona and it was just a rumor going around in college because he helped her a few times but he didn’t love her. Told his mom that Miona was just using to make herself more famous and even expressed hatred in his eyes. But it was mentioned previously that his feelings and love was stronger then it was for Miona. The excuse used to get Elena to forgive him was flimsy at best. But the excuse that was given for Elena’s ex is full of holes that don’t follow what was written previously.