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male LV 3
2018-03-12 đã tham gia Australia
Huy hiệu 4

Moments 17
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pain_
1 months ago
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well that was boring. He should just left with his dragon seems like ever story has the king spare.

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pain_
3 months ago
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I didn't even finish the chapter because he pulled another system ability when did he learn how much did cost him get this ability how hard was to learn this this breathing technique it just feels like your not even trying. it pulls me out of the immersion of the story.

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pain_
3 months ago
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I like the story. I think would be better off with out the system, I'm sure you could just have him learn a magic ability to recall his past memory he where he could have watched or read about film or computers technology. I'll keep reading keep up the good work!!

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pain_
4 months ago
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Could one of the arcs he goes be on space adventure??

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pain_
4 months ago
Replied to FinallyCaredNot

Wicked132

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pain_
4 months ago
Replied to Wickedward

Wicked132

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pain_
4 months ago
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Thanks for the chapter. The bio ship interaction was the best

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pain_
8 months ago
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Thanks for the chapter

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pain_
9 months ago
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Thanks for chapter.

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pain_
9 months ago
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that was a awesome way to start the School year. A fantastic Chapter keep the great work

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