alexny18111

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I like reading.

2018-06-08 đã tham gia Global
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alexny18111
alexny18111
1 years ago
Posted

Honestly, I didn't even care about the NTR in the beginning because no emotional connection was created. So I just read past it. Still, the story just isn't that good in my opinion. I think the concept is interesting but the execution needs some work. Maybe try a rewrite where you slow the story down a bit.

alexny18111
alexny18111
2 years ago
Posted

This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.

alexny18111
alexny18111
2 years ago
Commented

Yeah your still good. Trust me, as a regular reader of manhwa I have seen much worst quality!

Answer me honestly. Has something changed in the quality of my chapters recently? At least, in the last 3-4 chapters or something. I won't mind, I'll at least try to fix those mistakes, so please tell me if there is something.

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alexny18111
alexny18111
3 years ago
Commented

+1

alexny18111
alexny18111
3 years ago
Commented

+1

alexny18111
alexny18111
alexny18111
alexny18111
3 years ago
Commented

Great chapter! I like how your handling this

alexny18111
alexny18111
3 years ago
Commented

+1

alexny18111
alexny18111
3 years ago
Replied to Cewu

I think it's good. The app has some useful features.

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