Huy hiệu 10
Moments 5
Rauko
Translation quality is bad (mt?). No real world building, characters are idiots, or too simple... who give this story 4-5 star? Maybe the raw better, but I don't think so...
Rauko
energy drain, clones?
Rauko
I like your story and characters, but... if you still force this, we just friends and have *** sometimes direction, I will be disappointed. :( It can work in normal times in a swinger club, but not in this enviroment and in this cirkumstance...
Rauko
Good story, but a horrible machine translate... pleas give this story a real translater, and reedit (and translate) the chapters............
One of the worst chapter ever in this story... the MC become more stupid chapter by chapter... he have the means to resurrect the girl even now (phoenix blood...), he got strong seniors, and a celestial master... even when he got enough power, he can resurrect her, and all the fallaen heroes on his planet... but the author forgot even his planet... or his snake pet who was left behind to guard that tree... or his family... he got super technics to help them become strong (like multiple small worlds), but who cares, they can all die (even now, when he got celestial enemies)... so yeah, one of the worst chapter.
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Eastern · Ancient Xi