DaylithNight

DaylithNight

female LV 15

love reading, and more reading

2018-02-09 đã tham gia Global
Huy hiệu 43

Moments 10
DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

both please but iona first

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

please explain the golden ticket how do i use it?

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

Am I the only one who thought well sh** Looks like the mission wasn't what they were told and that the army set it up to look like they were attacked juat to see how they would reapond to a crash in seemingly hostile enemy territory

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

I can feel your desire to get to the fighting parts. It comes out in the little bits of forshadowing you have sprinkled throughout the last few chapters. Its moving a little slow at the moment, but in a good way that builds depth and foundation so that the more action oriented scenes that come later have something worth while to support them. Plus I have to go back to the forshadowing....... It really builds my anticipation for what I am sure will be epic 😁

Author's notes: Part of me feels that this is too slow, but maybe my desire to reach the fighting parts is affecting my judgment. I don't think I can accelerate the pace without neglecting important details, and I want to avoid that. Still, let me know what you think.

Chaos' Heir

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

Why were they in the slums at the time of the crash if they were only forced to move there due to the cost of his treatment?

Khan couldn't feel any anger toward his father. He knew how much Bret had sacrificed to keep him alive. They previously lived past the quarters of the Global Army, inside the bustling core of Ylaco. Yet, they had been forced to move in the Slums due to the expenses for his treatment.

Chaos' Heir

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

does any 9ne know how to turn off the auto unlock settings?

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

DaylithNight
DaylithNight
4 years ago
Commented

Dearest Author What are the requirements of said moderator and when can I start?