little blue riding hood. little green riding hood. I couldn't help remembering that.
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typo in title, should be biology. typo damina instead of Damian
The main issue I have is with Lydia. People may not get along and I understand that Lydia is alone, but she misses her status and needs to outnumber someone before attacking. Somehow mc is attracted, but even then when Lydia talks, she always makes herself be in the right. Every person is always on Lydia's side, even the mother of the mc and makes it out to be both of their faults.
when I review, iIthink aboutt how good it is compared to other books, was it good? would i I ever consider rereading it.There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, usually I could tell what the author wanted to say. It breaks immersion because I feel obligated to leave a comment for the author, but I gave up chapter 70, just too many typos, just leaving comments.There was a good twist on the fl. it switched pov to the villain not quite sure what was going on there. usually that is an attempt to give empathy or redemption and I didn't feel like it did either maybe because the villain was crazy.There are also a few things I didn't feel got addressed by the ML creating a logical inconsistency. particularly with how the maids treat ml's daughter.also not sure why fl played her hand so early, it doesn't feel safe and she should be a good parent but she created unnecessary danger for no reason. it wasn't bad but it wasn't particularly great either.
drinksw should be drinks. I think it's time to stop pointing out typos. too tired as they are increasing every chapter. the writing itself is fine. it just distracts from the story.
Jack Williams was having some drinksw with his brothers and cousins until the beautiful voice of his daughter was heard and Hearing that, a enchanting smile appeard on his face as he pulled his daughter in for a hug.
Daddy CEO, Graceful Secretary
Urban · Sharon_Rose18
thatz should be that
And with thatz she made her way to him with Mike behind her.
Daddy CEO, Graceful Secretary
Urban · Sharon_Rose18
the whole sentence needs a rewrite. I get the idea but should be fixed.
And he was gonna pay him ever dim of the money he has given to him. When his fully ready to get Rena out if his life, his gonnaake sure his done with her father as well.
Daddy CEO, Graceful Secretary
Urban · Sharon_Rose18
whether
Before Mike had became the CEO of the Xi's Enterprises, he was supported greatly by Rena's father. Wether or not it was because he and Rena were gonna get married or for other reasons, all he knew is that Mr. Williams played a big part in his success today.
Daddy CEO, Graceful Secretary
Urban · Sharon_Rose18
classic DOA.
Runemaster in the Last Days
Sci-fi · Sorahana