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male LV 15

Just an average guy

2018-02-01 đã tham gia United States
Huy hiệu 53

Moments 8
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1 months ago
Commented

so he was trained by his parents but never to control his emotions or love a common girl. also, if he has skills, why couldn't he spy or discover her tricks before getting caught unaware?

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7 months ago
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The dude needs to be present for most conversations now cause he knows more about what's going on, and the traitor needs to be ended cause he can still potentially have a way to talk to other enemies or they can have other ways to be track by the enemies wandering city.

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11 months ago
Replied to DaoistMdFPvj

then that's the same as doing it one at a time. clones have the potential to share feelings and maybe multiple versions of myself completely domonating 1 in multiple ways as well as all the girls at once while watching each other all be taken at the same time. just a different experience.

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11 months ago
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He owns a resort, and now he just needs a clone or body splitting power to handle all girls at once, turning his resort into a mansion home for his girls and maybe children later?

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1 years ago
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I hope it continues, maybe a new book or something but other than so many unanswered questions, great book

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2 years ago
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this is snippet from chapter 1184, please update

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3 years ago
Replied to Flat_Moon

hey, i've been an avid reader of this the first moment i saw it, however with your resent +18 chapter it took a dive with conflicting personalities and felt rush just to get to the steamy scene. if you want you the next time you write a +18 you can contact me and I can read it first and give you my opinion on it, so maybe you can make any changes you feel before post. I'm a fan of this and I hope it can go long and be fun till the end

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3 years ago
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A drastic change in multiple character traits and personality just to depict a lusty hook up. he is a wholesome dad and wouldn't do that openly. although he agree to sharing his relationship with 2 people he was honest about it and worried on its fisability, to now just doing the nasty practically infront of 2 strangers, which if caught would ruin his daughter's friendship and her image of him. it doesnt make sense with his personality. there steamy dance should have been saved for a scene like after a family trip or festival with lite teasing leading to her unlease restraint after getting home and everyone going to bed.