OrbitalWaste

male LV 12
2018-01-17 đã tham gia Sweden
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OrbitalWaste
OrbitalWaste
2 years ago
Commented

... All these A/Ns are too much, killing any immersion in the story. The irritation factor has reached high enough for me to no longer have the emotional energy to continue reading.

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OrbitalWaste
OrbitalWaste
2 years ago
Commented

Yes, this relationship has left me entirely uninterested. They both appear to somewhat like eachother, but June seems more focused on being perceived as inferior to Will. Whilst Will is so focused on his career and the system that he more or less forgets about June a lot of the time. Neither truly invested in each other. This has gone on for so long that, to me, the relationship interrupts and takes away from the story. Just end it and prepare a better pairing.

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