Well written overall but feels a bit AI like... Like the multiple use of all the tones like cold voice.. Etc is too frequent.. Also First person view would be better.... Good 1st chap though
Get well soon dear author, Yea the pace of the story is a bit slow but i am not complaining as ling as you are consistent and complete the story
Ok no problem I dont have anything planned just wanted to know if you have some epilogue chapters, if you haven't read ahead then u of course dont. Keep continuing the story good work brob
Hey, i like this book a lot and read ahead by mtl, its great, just completed chap 426 today. Thanx for posting it here 👍 Do you have any after story chapters?
Jasmine should have a mega steelix
I wanted to read something with happy vibes... But i picked this one and read all chapters.. now i dont know what to do 😕
The zubat and team rocket part is same as pokemon master of tactics fanfic Hope its not similar ahead as its a good story
Waiting for a new chapter
How is feraligatr water/dark? Its pure water
Take care bro, use a base like baking soda or toothpaste there
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