The novel turned dark real quick, good fanfic enjoyed reading it
The Fanfic is really good and just a suggestion , please end the flash backs in 2 chapters at most dragging it won’t help the story at all
Just some feedback for author: The backstory is taking too long and any reader would loose interest if backstories aren’t brief , I really like the fanfic but in the near future can you please try keep it simple.
Good novel but didn’t have a standard release rate
No point in keeping him around
-Have him disappear completely.
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Yep looks like a machine translated
Thanks for the chapter , hope you can continue writing
Looking forward to your next chapters
Wow literally a copy and paste , to be frank it’s terrible and needs a lot of editing or a rewrite
Good start, I have read one of you previous works of pokemon fanfic it’s really good , I really enjoyed reading your work