Huy hiệu 4
Moments 4
celefoata_
Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, too many run-on sentences, and the story feels dry. Paint dries faster than your story progresses.
celefoata_
Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, sentence structure feels weird, and the story feels clunky. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.
celefoata_
You discord nerds, I'm still the tler
Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs a bit of work and the story feels very dry. Characters feel really dry too, it's just a very... dry story. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.
The Descent of Dawn
Fantasy · xash_alan