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2017-12-09 đã tham gia Ascension Island
Huy hiệu 14

Moments 714
Cloud3886
Cloud3886
1 days ago
Posted

My Review Based on 170 Chapters The MC is heavily dependent on his rewind cheat—without it, he can't even defeat a low-level monster. It was enjoyable at first, then average, and now it's just bad. For example, there's a ghost granny killing her family members. The system issues a task to help the family but warns that doing so will attract the ghost's hatred. The MC had previously helped this ghost, and based on her character, she wouldn't harm even strangers as long as they didn't get in her way. However, being a goody two-shoes, the MC accepts the task. At this point, he's already being haunted by another, more powerful ghost that keeps following him. He ends up needing external help to deal with the granny, and during the entire arc, he is more of a side character than the protagonist. In another mission, his shadow gets possessed. Despite the system explicitly warning him to refuse the ghost by saying no, he says yes. Now, the ghost tries to kill him whenever his shadow is reflected in moonlight (basically every night). By the time I stopped reading, this issue still hadn't been resolved. A similar situation happens in My House of Horrors, a novel that is far superior to this one. Later, the MC gets an offer to collaborate with someone on a video shoot but rejects it, saying he wants to work alone. This decision makes no sense—he could have easily earned money, and he had already collaborated with his school friends in the past. His reasoning is that he doesn’t want to involve ordinary people, but the person offering the collaboration is a professional with experience and even has ghost slaves (though the MC doesn’t know this part). If you read this part, you’ll see that the MC's explanation feels completely illogical, especially since his main goal is earning money by recording ghost encounters. At the current point in the story, the MC receives a difficult mission with both a main and a side task. The side tasks offer no system rewards, but he can earn money from the rich families affected by them. The system warns him to attempt the mission only after gathering enough energy to rewind, but he still recklessly goes through with it. He decides to complete a side task that provides no energy, just monetary compensation. The main mission location is only a few meters away in an underground cave, where he nearly dies multiple times but survives using his rewind cheat. Then comes the first surprise—the MC gets infected. Even after rewinding, the infection remains, meaning he is destined to die no matter how many times he goes back. After exhausting all his stored energy, he barely manages to complete the side mission. But then comes the second surprise—the guy he rejected for collaboration sends his ghost to kill him. (Honestly, I understand the guy's reasoning—they both earn money from the same source.) The ghost successfully kills him, but the MC rewinds one last time using his remaining energy. However, he's still on the verge of death. At this point, I expected the shadow ghost to help him, but nope—the MC actually dies. When he wakes up, he checks his video footage to find out how he survived. Turns out, the ghost that had been haunting him since the granny mission had secretly left a backdoor in his body. This backdoor allows the ghost to control his life—if it dies, it can use the MC's body to revive itself, which would kill the MC in the process. In this situation, the ghost's split soul takes over his body, kills the attacking ghost, and heals the MC just to keep its own revival option intact. So now you can understand what I mean by "heavily dependent on his cheat"—the MC just does whatever he wants without thinking things through, and even his survival is no longer in his own hands.

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
4 days ago
Replied to NovelAdik

Greed about what, ninja Harry Potter ???

Now, after his third seclusion, Uzumaki Chito would awaken to an even greater tragedy. Kushina was gone, and her child, Naruto, had been left to fend for himself. Konoha had not only failed to protect her but had also neglected her son.

Naruto: After Seclusion Becoming Naruto Grandfather

Naruto: After Seclusion Becoming Naruto Grandfather

Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
12 days ago
Replied to DaoistS1v2Ou

Since you are in english fanfic review section, I assume you can read english, then why are you not writing in english ? People won't be able to understand that you are asking for raw.

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
13 days ago
Commented

It's better not to help him even if he is a friend, otherwise people will assume he has some treasure because he doesn't have any excuse for knowledge. If this type of knowledge was publicly available then this scenario wouldn't have happened.

Seeing that Li He couldn't listen at this time, Chen Qing was no longer interested in persuading him.

Longevity: Starting from Refining Gu

Longevity: Starting from Refining Gu

Eastern · A Cute Blacksmith

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
1 months ago
Replied to Samael_Son_of_Dawn

Why did it have to involve romance so soon ? Can't you have them create a hunter organisation like scp or something so they don't have to do depend on credit card fraud for income. You can even involve men of letters. There's a supernatural fanfic called dark nephilim on this platform, its mc is one of the child with azazel blood. That guy does become an archangel level strong. Romance is fine as long as it doesn't become one of the main parts, fanfiction .net is already filled to brim with that. I would prefer either no romance or minimal. But you do you and write what you like, it's not like you are getting paid here.

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
1 months ago
Commented

Please don't bring ruby as Sam love interest again, that whole chapter was so cringey to read, i dropped it at that point.

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
3 months ago
Commented

System manipulation.

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
3 months ago
Commented

This Wang mang is from our history, apparently he introduced many modern things like: 1) Land reform where land is given to all peasants and private selling is banned (land capitalism, which causes high prices). 2) currency changes to resemble modern currency 3) Banned slavery 4) relentlessly hunted an insignificant character called liu xui after becoming emperor. 5) Within 3 years liu xui destroyed Wang mang and became the new emperor, history was back to original things. 6) Wang mang had his wives and concubine wear skirts(they didn't exist then). 7) also invented some advanced device called caliper which was created 1000 years later. 8) also tried to stop people from believing superstition. From a novel perspective it looks like Wang Wang was a time traveller from the 90s and this liu xui guy was son of the world who killed this anomaly and restored time to original flow.

I'm the Big Boss Behind the Scenes: I even suspect that Feng Qi had been possessed. His difference between before and after is too great. In the past, he shone so brightly and was simply a savior model. In the end, he quickly failed before he could completely shine and he wasn't able to do anything in his future years. I suspect that this is the first real case in history of being possessed. It's as famous as Wang Mang's transmigration case.

I Hijacked The Timeline

I Hijacked The Timeline

Sci-fi · Slashing Blade

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
3 months ago
Commented

This Wang mang is from our history, apparently he introduced many modern things like: 1) Land reform where land is given to all peasants and private selling is banned (land capitalism, which causes high prices). 2) currency changes to resemble modern currency 3) Banned slavery 4) relentlessly hunted an insignificant character called liu xui after becoming emperor. 5) Within 3 years liu xui destroyed Wang mang and became the new emperor, history was back to original things. 6) Wang mang had his wives and concubine wear skirts(they didn't exist then). 7) also invented some advanced device called caliper which was created 1000 years later. 8) also tried to stop people from believing superstition. From a novel perspective it looks like Wang Wang was a time traveller from the 90s and this liu xui guy was son of the world who killed this anomaly and restored time to original flow

Version 1.036: We used a meteor to fix the bug with the time traveler Wang Mang.

Transforming Succubus: Almost Doomsday

Transforming Succubus: Almost Doomsday

Games · More from the heart

Cloud3886
Cloud3886
4 months ago
Replied to Frozen_One

The legendary mechanic