Lin_Song

Lin_Song

LV 5

A Good Book Is Always A Good Book No Matter How Many Times You Read It

2017-12-04 đã tham gia Luxembourg
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Lin_Song
12 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter

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Lin_Song
1 years ago
Commented

this could be an idea for the domain

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Lin_Song
1 years ago
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Thankfully no romance, I was considering whether to continue reading if she got together with bell. because bell already got a harem, plus I ship bell with artemis

number 3 won by a landslide getting double the votes of the 2nd most voted which is number 1 with 6 votes (including me), alright I would have thought Bell loving Xian would be more interesting but seems you guys don't want Xian to be a love interest

the demon goddess transmigrated into danmanchi?

the demon goddess transmigrated into danmanchi?

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Lin_Song
Lin_Song
Lin_Song
1 years ago
Commented

I think rewrite the part where licara comes in because she already has trouble dealing with her sword then someone suddenly pops out and coexist with her, borrowing her body or xian borrowing licaras body. Im not gonna say anything to the developmento of the story since you may have ideas on your own. Other than that I think you did well with the story.Give you this, Thank you

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Lin_Song
Lin_Song
1 years ago
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This two soul thing is making the story very complicated, much less see any significant importance of licara in the story. Anyway just saying, you don't need to mind this much. But I still wish they separate their body.

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