has potential , but there are some inconsistencys that arent that bad in the beginning but start to get on the nerfs later.
i understand that he is ahead of the curve of other students but fifth grade lvl on realy many subjects in two years seems little over the top . the wand has to come in to play sooner or later and bond with him . hes kinda a little OP alredy so dont push to much his superiority . thanks for the chapter loved it . keep up the good work XD
love this fanfiction!!! this is best hp FF i have read in a LOOOOONG time =) Keep going Creator!!!
haitus ? covid19 ? what happend ?
age 12 and already read all potter books and highly evolved in thoughts XD
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Wonderful chapter
good start! Interesting but please get someone that can proofread and edit all the grammatik misstakes in the text. love the series so far keep going
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first ^^ love this series!! best hp fiction out there !!
its a good series .. but with some small spelling mistakes . the character is in such a swing from childish to old . some inconsistensis with how powerful he is and then not . how he learns something like its nothing and then take forever for some other that are simpler to learn
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