SkyApple

A cool idea about living in marvel. High quality English. However the system, as they all do robs most agency from the mc's actions. Instead of being forced into living there, i think it would have been cooler if it was his own choice, something like wanting to save wanda from her own darkness leads him to pursuing a position to help her as well as the ability to not be as influenced by her power. The author tries to downplay the overpoweredness of essentially infinite creation with just words then immediately gives psychic powers and teleportation.?? This story wasnt meant for me i guess but to see a mortal struggle to win the heart of a vengeful god would have been cool. Finally lmao landlord. TLDR:interesting story, not for me.

Interestimg and mysterious power, good pacing and excellent grammar. I also like the characters who feel realistic and not 1 dimensional.

Better translation on other sites plus ntr'ing the heroine would be stealing her man lmao

"updated for modern audiences"Leylin is edgier and the ai is used either to dumb down explanations or praise Leylin for his genius. More of a reword than rewrite as the plot plays out to the same effects, tho I didn't read to the end but I don't imagine much difference. Whether to read or not depends on which writing style you prefer, original or a webnovel's system™