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Is his adaptability just about getting stronger? To me, adapting goes far beyond that. He can adapt to cold, heat, poison, cuts, blunt force, and even weight. But how powerful is it? It’s obvious that it’s not instantaneous. You need to establish a limit or a timeframe. Adaptability goes beyond that. He can adapt to seeing in the dark. It’s much more complex than just getting stronger. If there’s no ceiling to how much he can adapt, it’s too OP. But you can balance this with the time it takes. If he dives and manages to hold his breath for x minutes, the next day, how much longer will he be able to hold it? Twice as long? Three times? Or even less than that? I’d be obsessed with this ability, trying to understand it, its limits, and how it works. But the protagonist hasn’t tested anything yet.
I only had to read the first chapter to drop it. The first rule of a reincarnation or self-insert fanfic is... YOU DON'T TELL ANYONE YOU'RE REINCARNATED!!! And the first thing he does is tell! He goes around spreading this information for free. And Padmé, who is Anakin's wife, just accepts her husband's death and a strange guy in his body. Don't waste your time on this.
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original Reencarnado em The Walking Dead como Carl Grimes
Acordei no corpo de uma criança, só para perceber que estava em um mundo fodido. Meu preparo para oque está por vir se limita a minha idade. Não há muito oque eu possa fazer sobre isso. Mas eu sou um Grimes agora. E uma coisa sobre os Grimes, você não fode com eles. Se você espera um protagonista que semeia a paz ou que lidera, essa história não é para você. Rick vai ser o líder do grupo. E Carl vai ser ser o terror dos inimigos do grupo.1 Chs 4 sưu tầm
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Luka Zoric
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