Is 5’11” impressive?
Kaye stood at an impressive height of 5'11, her muscles defined and able to put any man to shame. Confidence and pride showed on her face, as she knew her mission was of the utmost importance. Short rough-cut brown hair hung on her head like a mop. She also sported freckles and one large scar along her jaw that showed her skill in previous combat. Her armour was made of iron plates and silver inlining, magical runes carved onto it, with magic stones attached in the sockets to allow cooling of the armour.
God is a Game Designer
Fantasy · Cddizzym
This bothers me, because he doesn’t actually need much of an explanation. It’s not as complicated as he’s making it out to be, all he has to say is that you can find a rare metal nearby these gemstones usually. Boom, explanation done, everyone understands why he’s excited
Diaspore consisted mainly of aluminum oxide and was a by-product of bauxite and its discovery suggested that there was probably a large amount of aluminum in this area. That meant, the mud and rocks dumped by them could be used as raw materials for aluminum extraction. As the most abundant metal element in the earth, aluminum was more common than iron and could practically be found everywhere. Lucia could extract small amounts of aluminum from any rock on the ground, but it was clearly not efficient enough for industrial needs. Only places that were rich in aluminum were worth excavating.
Release That Witch
Fantasy · Second Eye
Wait, when did the month of demons end? I thought it was still ongoing?
Wait, if it’s distributing steam to every room, wouldn’t they get really wet?
To be fair, he had just gotten finished telling her that normal people hunt down, torture, and then execute witches in this time. Which would make anyone kinda murderous if they’re in the ‘being hunted’ group
My question is how much refilling will these things actually need? The material seems to be more airproof than regular balloons and such, so will there be any hydrogen loss? I guess there would be some whenever they land, but that just means they should build high docks so that they never land and hydrogen loss is kept at a minimum
Ok, so in his description of what he could do with the husks, one option was return it to the field as fertilizer, so why did he decide to burn it instead? Using it as fertilizer seems like it’d be the easiest and most effective method, yet instead he burns it forcing his people to deal with all the smoke. Why? It’s one of the few actions he’s taken that i truly don’t understand
Ok, not sure why author brought up rifling for the harquebus, rifling wasn’t invented until much later so it wouldn’t have been an issue for crafting one back then.
My brother does it. It’s an abomination to see, but it works and nothing falls off or out. (An abomination because he shouldn’t, not because it’s difficult or anything)
The only thing I’ll say is that maybe you should post this on Spacebattles, as judging from the comments most people here can’t appreciate this novel, as they only want a Mary Sue power fantasy with the MC curbstomping everyone who inconveniences him
God is a Game Designer
Fantasy · Cddizzym