Althalus - Profile

I enjoyed the plot and the characters, however, the grammar needs to be reviewed especially the pronouns as they swap between him and her for the same character frequently.

The first forty chapters were somewhat entertaining, however, I do question how long this type of story can continue to be interesting. There were several grammar mistakes and the flow was choppy in several places. I wouldn't mind reading a little more past the first forty chapters to see how it will proceed.

I enjoyed the book, it is not as good as the Library yet but the 40 chapters were good.

One of the best books I have read. this is my second time through it.