SlyMonster

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2017-09-19 đã tham gia France
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SlyMonster
SlyMonster
4 years ago
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Now that she saw the series of runes before Joshua, which she had never seen before, the urge to forget about learning magic, and just pack up, go home, and get married suddenly welled up within her!

Bringing Culture to a Different World

Bringing Culture to a Different World

Fantasy · Sister's Bride

SlyMonster
SlyMonster
4 years ago
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I am glad to see someone having exactly the same feelings about this story. It is mediocre, yet interesting.

SlyMonster
SlyMonster
4 years ago
Posted

My main problem with this novel is the poor level of attention the author gives to details. I am not speaking about the many, many, many english mistakes, but the numerous calculation errors of exp gain, hp ... The author constantly forgets some xp points and the effects of some skills or the environment. For example, at the beginning of the novel, the MC's HP were affected by the sunlight. After a while, this stopped. For the xp, it was actually more often wrong than correct. You can reread chapter 234 and 235 as an example. The world background is frustrating to say the least. How are the dalki strong enough to easily take on bullets, when one of them got injured by the MC weak strength?? As a reminder, Erin reached 50 point of damage with her ability... The beasts and the beasts gears doesn't make much sens, the abilities are very weak and the political landscape is a mess. Seemingly half of the military personnel is either a sergeant or general. How many generals do you think should be stationed in a school ?? How many schools are there??? 8 if I remember correctly, but they seemingly have under a thousand students...