Dorne are not mad about the rebelion, they are mad that Elia and her children were raped and murdered and our boy was the only one who demanded justice that is important in a medieval society, oberyn may still be mad but Doran will appreciate the gesture and see a opportunity, I'm not even gonna address the Magic statement have and see that what you wrote makes 0 sense
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Book&Literature · JManM
having your liege lord disliking you is not good, it limits the kinda of shenanigans our boy can get himself into, specially if said liege lord is closer then a brother to a warmonger king who likes to smash heads In, the lanisters can't do much to a tank of a man who is a precog
ch 55 SHAME! SHAME! SHAME!
Book&Literature · JManM
honestly the rant even if not planned is gonna give him lots of benefits, nobody rly likes the lanisters and the people who do already think poorly of jorah and with this move Ned will probably respect him more, Robert in a few years to, Dorne will instantly like him so all in all a good move
ch 55 SHAME! SHAME! SHAME!
Book&Literature · JManM
I remember the first version of this story it was quite good, now author both emma a laura are top tier, but I'm starting the petition to add ororo she is quite underused, and her elemental powers would round up the Harem nicely telepaty, melee combat and elemental ranged powers
Roman's Love Interests:
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
good choice specialy against spiritual beings, that were very anoying to deal in the novel, CE is a very good buy, and if you can buy hax abilities is so much more busted, just the 6 eyes would boost his control and and precision to a new lvl with the force to probably
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Anime & Comics · SlyOW
julius obviously has some kind of mind power
you know what both are good, but obviously the the current captain is superior
ch 0 4 Chapter four: First steps.
Anime & Comics · KindaWeirdChampBro
It's fine dude good luck on your exams
ch 81 exam in two days
TV · WebReaderPub
I see all good keep up the good work
ch 0 -2 Changes I brought to the novel
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
All the changes are prety fair it will be a bit disappointing the no rewards other the items when returning to world's but I get that not abusing it would be pretty stupid so it's a fair change the genetic constraints changes are pretty good to and I agree with you after the 3 one it invalidated one of the coolest things of the story the character builds, I still have a couple of questions but u can not answer them since it will be revealed sooner or later, in the novel to become a leader u need the approval of the guide is it the same thing here, and about the timeline is it the same one of the mc of terror infinity?
ch 0 -2 Changes I brought to the novel
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
all good ty
speaking of Rome a setting that I imagine your style fitting like a glove is Spartacus specialy the later seasons could do with your brand of practicality
More pressing is my need to revise the chapters for 'Lizard Daddy Primarch'. On a reread it feels like the flow is more fucked than a pornstar, and on top of that I need to make some shifts in Angron's narration to show the influence of the Emperor coming through. There are also wild inconsistencies between Angron's first two chapters, and I need to scale down the size of the Nucerian city states considering they spent years trying to put down Angron's rebellion. Sounds like I should scale them to actual historical Rome size rather than space Rome size.
Book&Literature · JManM
the daynes are the second or at most the 3 more powerfull house in Dorne not to mention that G.R.R probably has big plans for them shame we prob wont see them
As such, I don't think Ashara is going to get hooked on a feeling for the Hungry Bear.
Book&Literature · JManM
you did a good job just keep doing the same from before space them trought the story
And to clarify something Lemons won't be often, maybe this might be the last depending on if you want any more.
GOT : Reborn as a Frey
Book&Literature · Numera