Let’s see how it develops
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The story definitely has potential but it would be easier to say more or make a better review with more chapters
He seem‘s too strong for me also why did Kaido locked him up for such a long time without anyone visiting or releasing him ? Also I personally think it would complicate things if Kaido died now
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One Piece: the son of Kaido
Anime & Comics · truepowerscaler1
I find your story worthwhile reading although their aren’t that many chapters till know. Still I would like to ask a few plotholes as Yamato should be nearly 10 years older then Nami from canon. So did they timettraveled or how can they be as it sounds in the story be nearly the same age. Also what happened to her Devil Fruit - did she eat it ?
„… he fought...“
Once in a practical class, he fight against Uchiha Yuki.
Uchiha With Glasses
Anime & Comics · Lessa_Grace
„… his brotherhood.“ right ?
The issue resolved, Asuma returned enthusiastically. He stepped forward, and hugged Gen tightly, with the intention of sealing his sisterhood.
Naruto: Evolution
Anime & Comics · theusual
Their aren’t many chapter to say to much but till now it was a good story which is a good read. Hopefully the upgrades brought by the orbs will be toned down otherwise this story will move way to fast into the universe and out of the One Piece World 😂 All in all I find it a great story and hope for more updates
Can‘t say much for now as their are not enough chapters to read
First of all I really like your story and choice of Martial Spirit. Although I personally find the speed of the story development slightly slow it‘s my own opinion 😅 Secondly I hope you will keep up with the good work till now und not drop this after a few more chapters
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He should have had Kagami‘s eye at that time since he used Izanagi in the fight against Shisui
She could see that her grandfather's cells were used in making the arm, and before Hiruzen could stop her, Tsunade tore off the arm from Danzo's hand.
Naruto: Different Perks
Anime & Comics · Kaoski