Ok. so, the story is quite good and interesting the world background is also intriguing. however, comes the writing quality, which is simply garbage! the author couldn't do worse than that. its not just about the grammar and spelling or the repeated paragraphs at the start of each chapter. the story's consistency is also ruined by messing the stats of the MC (the mc loses stats the more he levels up-the author forgets his past numbers). Well, Author if you are reading this, please revisit your writing style and try keeping a log of what you provide in each chapter. aside from that i really enjoyed reading the story but you somehow managed to ruin it for me up to this moment. i'll try investing a little more time in. Sorry for the rude notes if any.
do you even know how many times you messed up his stats numbers? you are basically ruining the story for us!! please keep track of the numbers ! his strength should be past 50 not 40 and his agility should be 40 not 30 his perception is messed up too only his intelligence is aligned.
why did u not continue writing this novel? Just wondering what made u stop such a very good and promising story. the plot so far is good and unique, the story is really good but all to no avail.
Author-San, i would like to commend you on your hard work and encourage you to keep going. don't worry i will stay with you. the story is great, by the way. your writing quality improved by leaps and bounds. congratulations.
Infinite Potential System
Eastern · NecW