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Great chapter. Just a minor adjustment is needed. From the context, it seems you meant to write "dusk" when you mentioned "dawn" before sunset. Otherwise, thanks for the chapter. I'm loving the book so far.[img=recommend]

I noticed for a few chapters the MC "Natsuki" became "Kazuya" until the last chapter where you introduced a root agent named "Kazuya". Now it's back to "Natsuki", could you please fix or explain this for me? Thx.

I love the ending. Hilarious.

Is Mrs. Norris supposed to be Mr. Filch?

I like it, but it's still frustrating that we haven't gotten a reason why Tom lets his brothers treat him like that other than, "they're family".

Thanks for the clarification.

In the earlier chapter, you wrote that Malachi was born in 1506. I'm guessing you meant 1606 considering you changed the timeskip from 1721 to 1611.

Love this!!

Still feels great to read.

Thanks a lot, I really thought I had lost track of the story. Especially since the pov was changing so rapidly.

I am genuinely interested in this story.

I risk sounding clueless and inattentive but wasn't this a book about an immortal establishing his house and increasing his power in planetos. For me, it's like the mc moved to Winterfell and married a Stark and then the book started focusing on the things around the mc while barely mentioning his actions and development as a passing thought. Please help me if I lost track of the plot somewhere.

I haven't read the whole chapter but it's like you've skipped a few things in the beginning. Please let me know if I'm wrong.

+1. But I would rather have consistent releases, that you can sustain. It's sad to find intriguing stories and suddenly the author discontinues due to lack of planning, unsustainable schedule, or loss of interest in the project. Thus my suggestion is to take the time to plan out the world-building character development, and story arcs and make a backlog of chapters as a buffer for when you face real-world problems. We understand that authors have lives aside from just writing but we would also like to avoid investing time in something you yourself as the author aren't invested in. So I implore you to please take your time and make this work. I really like what I've read so far. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend] :)

Thx for the chap!! This 1 chap a week schedule is killing me!! Can't wait for the next chap

The novel is pretty good quality compared to many others on this platform and I commend you, author. This is probably just me but the story is really dragging. we're 32 chapters in and it's like there has been little progress since chapter 18. I understand you're trying to build up the mc's character leading up to the 20th century and canon time but it's not very engaging. please understand that this is just my opinion and you can disagree, either keep up the good work.

Thx for the chapter. For some reason, I never like Steve's attitude. It always seems like he's making demands and thinks he is entitled to everything he demands.

This story reminds me of "I beg you all, please shut up". Is it based on it?