It's okay, but the development, the plot flaws, and you don't explain how he isn't a killing machine since he absorbs people with their history and more memories than his own life.and it hasn't changed at all, it just got a little sadder, there are no consequences or development in that part and the lack of explanation of the powers as far as I've read is just absorbing sin, you remember and skills but you don't show any of that
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Good fight sequence, much better than most authors and I read it in Spanish, I don't know if it will be in English[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins]
esperaba algo más.
Seriously, how important is the captain in this part of the story? 😮💨
It's good, it just needs to polish the dialogues and interactions and not add too many things in a short period of chapters.
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