I found it interesting! but the paragraphs are way too long hahaaha it ends up tiring Try to break them, no need to rewrite them. just split those long paragraphs into 3 or 4 small ones
OK, I know where this is going! And I feel like I'm going to cry hahahahahaha let's see if it really happens Anyway, I liked the beginning! direct to the point
The story is interesting; I liked it! My only criticism is that even though the chapters are tiny, the paragraphs are large, tiring the reading a little. It would be good to break them up a little, making them easier to read.
I really love regression stories. even though this isn't our "usual" regression story, it still got me excited. I can't wait for the next chapters
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Like any good author without shame, I'm going to review my own book kkkkk I had started writing this book on another account a LONG time ago, just the beginning, but I deleted it! Wuel.. This book is my private world; I always think about it when I go to sleep or when I'm bored. This book started when I had to design a Visual ID as a TCC. (TCC is a course conclusion project that the graduates need to finish at the end of college, I don't know what it's called in other countries, hahaha) For this project, I created a fictional game and had to make the game's background. That's when the embryo of this world began to be born, and I started to think about this world a little bit every day, even after finishing the project. I'm not saying all this for you to think it's good, hahaha; it's just to let you know that it was my private world for a long time. Before, I tried to share it, but I deleted it because I wasn't comfortable. Now I want to try sharing it again. It might go bad, but I hope you enjoy the journey.
The parrot stopped at the side and flapped its wings as it cried, "Cuckold! Cuckold!"
Fantasy · His Majesty Scholar
"Su Changqing arrived in front of the reclining Zhou Emperor and ..." You guys know the rest.......
Su Changqing arrived in front of the reclining Zhou Emperor and bowed. He had always been able to constantly correct his position, never growing too arrogant because of the Emperor's favor. This was where he was smart compared to the others.
Eastern · My Daughter is too Cute
If there's something that I hate it's these MCs who get stoic and expressionless. For me its just reflects the author's inability to describe reactions without making the MC look like a virgin or pervert.
With just one glance, a thousand thoughts already ran through his head, but his expression did not show it at all.
Fantasy · Eternal Dream
I'm Totally in love with this book. I added it to my library!!! I hope you continue writing it. Keep up the good work and keep updating [img=recommend]
Celestial Bloodline
Fantasy · _Orange_