_Ocelot_

Please don't let the characters in this book be tolerant of this hideous child's snarky & narcissistic behaviour in every chapter.

I put this in my library because there are 69 chapters but only 34 of them are available without privilege - and Webnovel had me voting for a book for 2 years that never got past 60 chapters without privilege so not falling for that trick again.That said, this looks like it might be interesting. I skimmed the first chapter to check for grammar errors, too many characters introduced without a back story, and repeat paragraphs (the stuff that usually makes me drop a book). I'll leave a review once there are at least 60 chapters available without paying for privilege.

This isn't worth reading if the exact same text is posted twice in one chapter. It's like the trick of repeating the same text in a 10 page self-reflection letter because you know that no one is going to read the whole 10 pages. But I'm reading whole chapters, and this is BS.

The mishaps with the names are getting a bit annoying.

'Later, Lu Jingchen would be with [Ji Zimo] - NOT- with the Human Resources Manager Xun at the branch office.

'Ji Yao, I see you've been pretty close to Ji Yao. Why not make LJ think you're close to Ji Yao...' Please get the names straight. The FL, Ji Yao, isn't going to fool anyone by dating herself (Ji Yao).

It's Lu Jingchen's mother, not Ji Zimo's mother. The old cow is Zimo's prospective mother-in-law