I like the character development in The Dream and is something I've found to be truly original. Ansh's antics and his personal interactions are something I've really enjoyed and look forward to. I've kind of made this my default to drop power stones unless I find a story or chapter that I find really lets of "sparks".
While dubious of the story due to the tittle issues, I have to say I was absolutely shocked at how much I enjoyed the story. At the beginning of the story I was a little weary of the plot devices used like the basilisk venom and the familiar and their use in character development, I don't think they were overdone. Thank you to the author. I hope to continue seeing where this goes. It have to wonder if the user interface on the uploader/author's side allows for renaming. Does anybody know?
I've loved the story so far. The ending of this last chapter was a bit of a harsh transition from the previous story flow.
I like your work, but the flipping though the slides on YouTube is too much of a pain. Is there an easier way to change pages than to do that pull up and tinker with a slider?
I noted improvement in the last couple chapters. Thank you, I'm really looking forward to your work.
Good story. I have hope that this will potentially be a good read. The only negative I see is terrible use of gender pronouns (him/her/he/she). It makes it VERY confusing to read to the point it interrupts the flow of the story.
This is really an impressive story and i love the unique twist to the system concept. Thank you.
As long as you pick an ending that flows with the story. Mass Effect would be great as there is already some crossover. I just hope not to see it drag on like some of the 2-4000 chapter novels.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Good luck. I hope you are successful in developing the story into your vision. Thank you. I appreciate the uniqueness/originality of the premise of your story.
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