Young Justice: Magic 101

LV 3

NagiToad

I generally don't try to post reviews when there's not many chapters but the 2 I've seen so far are great (along with me wanting to encourage the author to continue the story/not drop it). Because of the lack of chapters I cannot put much in the review however the writing quality and grammar are great, I enjoy the main character's personality (so far he seems to be more on the gentlemanly humorous kind that also brings up other's lack of common sense), and I love the world of DC so that's a plus. The only bad things I can say about this is how short the chapters are, lack of chapters, and the chances this might be dropped based off of the author's other fanfics However that doesn't take away from this fanfic as even though the chapters are short they are of great quality and I wouldn't want the author to get burnout by making them write more per chapter. It's a newly made fanfic so it makes sense that it'll take a while for the chapters to reach a stockpile point and patience is needed for that to happen. As for the chance of dropping there's not much that can be done besides supporting/encouraging the author to continue and hope they don't get burnout Overall it's a great fanfic that I would recommend reading (though maybe you might wanna stockpile the chapters some)

LV 4

lNell

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LV 4

GreenoDZ18

this is the beginning of something good hope you continue with it vary existed for another chapter good work😄😄😄

LV 4

1000IronBladeHero

Loving the fic so far despite it having five chapters right now. If there was one problem I could point out it’s that you had a couple of spelling errors but I am not sure if those were on purpose or not.