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Li Mo woke up from his sleep only to realize he was in a magical world where he was the most handsome man.
He was the bastard child of the king of a small human kingdom. Because of his lack of talents, he couldn’t train in martial arts nor magic.
The worst part was that he was lying on the bed of the queen of the Dragon clan.
As he stared at the gorgeous queen, he activated a unique Check-in System.
“Ding! Congratulation. You have activated the Check-in System.”
“Ding! Congratulation. You have received the Yin and Yang Cultivation.”
Li Mo was curious about the Yin and Yang Cultivation and checked his system.
Yin and Yang Cultivation: By merging with a woman, you will strengthen your body and increase your cultivation level.
Li Mo raised his head to look at the gorgeous lady in front of him and smiled, “Then, what are we waiting for? Take me!”
That was the beginning of a man’s otherworldly journey on the bed with countless women…
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The story skips chapters, (or the author has amnesia). Characters refer to words never said, sudden important characters start speaking without ever properly "showing up", the MC uses a talent without ever "getting it", etc. Even if you ignore all that, the story itself is still trash. This site has much better "ecchi" stories if that's what you are looking for,
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I can read trashy grammar and sometimes rated 5⭐ to it but this story has too many missing scene and elaboration, making it hard to read.(2⭐Writing Quality) That's all I'm complaining the rest ⭐ is my honest but not honest review...(I'm a True Neutral btw so don't hate me for this review.)
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Any novel that misses out on more than a chapter's worth of content can never get a rating above 1 from me. Translators that do this should really find something else to do with their life.
looks like it might be good story but I'm only 5 or 6 chapters in and it always feels like there is a chapter missing every other chapter or so.
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I'm opposed to these kinds of stories which is why I'm rating it so low. If you read other reviews you'll see a few indicating there's issues with the story itself. I hope this does not get picked.
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the unique story style is good but I can't wait. So anyone knows RAW for this novel. Any help will be appreciated.
can't understand the storyline. some of the scene or action are missing. the novel jumps from one scene to another even tho that scene hasn't even finish yet. mc be do the dirty with the Queen but then all of a sudden his fighting some character that was not introduce.
The missing chapters were put later so it got better. rated 18 Chinese novels are pretty rare so I hope this one gets picked................
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A good start to a very enjoyable story. The writing is good and characters are well developed. The story mainly revoles around the activities and less on the locations they occur in.
Story jumps, just imagine what happens between the chapters. ( And that in the first 3 chapters ) wow we can be proud of the autor …. Story jumps, just imagine what happens between the chapters. ( And that in the first 3 chapters ) wow we can be proud of the autor ….
story skips chapters, (or the author has amnesia). Characters refer to words never said, sudden important characters start speaking without ever properly "showing up", the MC uses a talent without ever "getting it", etc. Even if you ignore all that, the story is still subpar and now they are adding chapters to explain things and these chapters interrupt the story flow
Omggggg this is a amazing book you should definitely read it so yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bye
It's hard to read it, it feels like there are chapters missing as jump from one scene to next. MC is also confusing, at first he is an Otaku who doesn't leave his home then he was an expert who worked at a massage parlor. It's like the author doesn't know what background to give the MC, so he adds things as the story goes on