/ LGBT+ / Winter Rain
Tóm tắt
Xiao He Ling could be called as the heartthrob of his hometown, a ball of sunshine loved by all~
But the one who made his heart throb to the point that...he couldn't even breath properly...was that one boy who appeared in his life out of nowhere and made his whole life upside down...
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Very interesting start and plot. The character design is amazingly done. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work and keep updating.
Amazing! I love the plot since it's something I haven't read before, and the way the author puts a dot after each paragraph or segment helps maintain the flow of the reading. The only advice I could possibly offer is to implement more descriptive writing. Otherwise, the novel is wonderful! Keep up the good work, author!
First of all, I like the conversations between the characters, the start was nice and interesting. I will be looking forward to more chapters!
I love how straightforward the story telling was. Plus the interaction are cute and the characters have chemistry. Looking forward for more chapter!
Okay for starters, love the way the writer began the story, the characters are great and overall the book really do have potentials, Great work
This story has a lot of potential. I would recommend the author to work on grammar, and sentence structure. Other than that, I found no major issues.
The genre is my favorite, and I really enjoy your story. I especially like the character of Ling, and I find your writing to be well-crafted, easy to understand, and with a good flow. I am looking forward to reading more chapters in the future
I love the way the Author started the book, it was fantastic and the character design is awesome