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What if crocodile’s plans for Baroque works were different.
And what if rather than sending mr.7 to Zoro they sent mr.1?
Would Zoro join them?
if this made you interested then read to know more.
(The cover is not mine if the original artist want me to take it down contact me)
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Hi author, I like the idea ur going for, but the way you execute it kinda makes me unmotivated to continue reading it. The chapters feel really stretched out, for example the battle he is having with Mr. 1 took more than 6 chapters and the fanfic just started! When I came back after seeing a new update it felt like I already forgot what the situation is about and who the side characters are, which caused me to be confused with who bryan is and the other pirates in the tavern. Also your writing style feels kinda tiring to read, there might've been a problem while proofreading the ff what causes it to feel tiring, might just be me tough. Overall the problems this ff have are easily fixable and if there are any improvements, be sure to remind me so I can give this fanfic more stars.