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Walking with Celestials
4.84 (16 số lượng người đọc)
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Hirow, a boy fascinated with the stars, dreams of the world outside his small village. His inquisitive nature leads him to befriend an old man who believes light is evil and find a girl who has fallen from the stars. Laniakea, a woman in the far north fights for survival as she escapes her past. Finding a new purpose she seeks those who have taken on the curses of this world. Calder, a prince from a kingdom far to the east, is exiled by his father and seeks to reclaim the throne. Yet his search for truth and revenge in this mad world leads him down unexpected pathways. As the fate of Hirow, Laniakea, and Calder converge, the mysteries of their world are brought forth.
This story will also be posted to royalroad.com
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Really liked the story, the writing style and word choices are really interesting.
a great start to a promising fantasy novel. i hope the author continues to release more chapters for the novel because it really has the potential to huge. keep working hard!
Reading this book has been a delightful experience so far. The vivid imagery and symbolism used throughout the book have added another layer to the story's depth, making it a joy to read. I would like to tell author to update the chapters frequently. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a well-written, absorbing story.
First I would start with Writing Quality (5 stars) It's honestly good. Expressive and I hardly saw any grammar errors. Stability of Updates (5 stars) It's okay as well. Looking forward to more. Story development (4 stars) The story has a good flow and I like the way the author transitions to different characters' povs. Character design (4 stars) It's a bit early to give a say if the characters are good. its only 8 chapters as of writing this review but from what I've read this story has potential so I'm looking forward to it. World Background (5 stars) Author I love the way you set up the details that go into the world. It reminds me of my story. Good details. The world is forever changing not dependent on the mc for the changes. I love that aspect. Overall verdict great series that has potential with a sense of mystery of the past present and future. keep it up. [img=recommend]
This was written extremely well. The author excels at the little details that adds realism to scenes. Some of the dialogue can use a few touches, but overall it was enjoyable. I will definitely come back to binge read once more chapters are released.
Great premise with a good amount of world building that just pulls you in and left needing more. I have added this to my library as I'm excited to see where this story goes further down the line!
Good story, love the word building, hardly saw any grammatical errors. But, I would have love to have a clear picture of the world settings in the first 3 chapters. This might tend to reduce the readers attention. I would definitely read more to grasp the content of your book. Nice work author
Am looking forward to keep on reading this... I really do love the characters as well as the way they communicate as well, so realistic ... The author really did a great job with the writing as well... Do keep on updating author
A very interesting concept, the author has conveys the humanity of characters very well, the conversations between characters is very realistic. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
I really love the way the author writes. It's poetic and descriptive, allowing for vivid imagery. I can imagine the characters really speaking as described and it keeps me engaged in the plot. Minor grammar issues here and there, but nothing editing couldn't fix in the future. Great work!
Amazing poems and the way you write is fantastic ☺️ you have a great potential
I really enjoyed the beautiful way you write! The characters are complex and I enjoyed the manner in which you managed to portray their emotions. The world building is gorgeous, and I am looking forward to reading more from this story in the future!
I like this so far. I like the details of the world very much. I like the main character and the old man. I like for once that the power of light isn't actually a good thing.
Very unique story, I enjoyed reading this, good way of starting the novel, very decent paced as well!
Good premise, with some unique execution, I hope the author would grow as the story keep going on. The settings was unique and new to me, it make me curious about where this story taking place. And with kingdom in it, I hope to read more. Nice work author!