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Utopian System

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"Mana to breathe, mana to eat, mana to fucking live,"

Inhale: -0.001 MP… oops! You're out of mana points. In the world Elio lives, every gasp of air comes at a price.

In humanity's last walled stronghold, Elio deals with a magical system that turns survival into a pay-to-breathe RPG. Here, poverty isn't just being broke, it's choking.

Surrounded by barren land and a sea of monsters (No water, just literal monsters), each day is a suffocating dance of survival, a balancing act between mana for air and mana for food.

In this economy, holding your breath isn't just a game, it's a retirement plan.

Driven by desperation Elio dives into the Book System's trials to save his family, unlocking powers beyond his comprehension that might just crack open the world's secret… And his own.

Immerse yourself in an adventure where one young man's stubborn refusal to become a statistic could spark a revolution.
Who knew being a pain in the system's rear could change the world?

Because in Elio's world, breathing is just the beginning of the revolution and he's gasping for change.

But hey, who said saving the world had to be all doom and gloom? Join Elio as he kicks monster butt, uncovers magic-chemistry secrets, and maybe, just maybe, figures out how to grow a tree or two along the way.

Warning: May contain traces of world domination, an unhealthy obsession with the periodic table, damage points, progression math, and yes, even a sprinkle of that old "power of friendship" magic. Because sometimes, you need a buddy to help you remember which element does what or even help you calculate those sweet, sweet stats.

+ LitRPG +Fantasy +Sci-Fi +Coming of Age +Elemental Powers +Dungeon Exploration +Kingdom Building +Strategic Battles +Terraforming +Long-lived Protagonist +Dystopian World +Utopian Elements +Scientific Magic +Monsters +World Mystery + Leveling System +Unique Abilities +Resource Management +Political Intrigue +Family Bonds +Friendship +Personal Growth +Epic Scale +Worldbuilding +Chemical Reactions +Invocations +Summoners +City Defense +Exploration +Discovery +Innovation +Survival of Humanity +God's Will +Demon City +Mana Management +Mana Economy +Indestructible Walls +Monster Cores +Time Skips +Leadership Development +Power Progression

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    Dagzo
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    "Shameful Author Review: I give 5 stars to my story because I love it. We writers need to love our histories so you can too, right? Hey there, future world conqueror! Ever dreamed of ruling the world but thought, 'Nah, that's too much paperwork'? Well, buckle up buttercup, because Elio's about to show you how it's done! This ain't your grandma's 'power of friendship' story (though we've got that too, because even world conquerors need a high-five sometimes). We're talking epic battles, mind-bending magic (literally, we'll bend elements!), and a journey that'll make your head spin faster than Elio dodging a monster's claws. From zero to hero? Pfft, more like from 'can barely afford air' to 'I own the atmosphere, suckers!' Watch as our boy Elio goes from struggling to breathe to basically becoming the world's landlord. And trust me, this lease is for way more than 100 years. So, ready to join the 'Conquest Club'? Don't worry, we have cookies. They cost mana, but hey, nothing's free in this world. Except maybe Elio's snarky comments and impromptu chemistry lessons. Those are on the house. Bring your friends along for the ride, after all, someone's gotta help you keep track of all those elemental reactions. Just remember: in this world, the pen might be mightier than the sword, but a well-timed fireball beats them both! P.S. If you spot any typos, blame the mana shortage. It's hard to proofread when you're busy saving the world and trying to remember if combining oxygen with hydrogen will give you water or a really big boom!"

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    DaoistK6a2wc

    Well written story, amusing and easy to get hooked to it. Good world building, pace, plot and character developing so far, main character is smart and uses the system feasibly. Hope it will become popular soon. A must read, can't wait for next update!!!

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    SunScar

    It's quite an interesting story with a unique concept. Loved the power system and the nature of Elio. The world-building is also intriguing. Waiting for more chapters!

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    baandrews

    The title says Utopian but it's a rather dystopian and dark experience. The character has a lot of inner turmoil, and you can feel his struggle, making you root for him. Let's hope he can show everyone who underestimated him, where he really belongs!

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    Dolores_Dominguez

    I'm enjoying this story much more than I expected. A dystopia where mana is necessary to breathe is something I don't recall reading before. The humorous moments are pleasant and well-timed, without being over the top. So far, the plot has me completely hooked. I hope it continues this way, and I can't wait to see what the fourth monster does next.

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    Nieton

    been having a blast, the comedic moments are gold

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    Crisa_LG

    I think it's an interesting story, I'll wait for the next chapters.

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    Nieton

    Really liking the world building and the magic system, Elio fights well too so I'm having a good time till now, hope there is more soon

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    Gabriel_Gutierrez_2140

    Easy to read and getting hooked in the story

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    VonRol

    i find the story interesting, i identify it with several games, i hope for more chapters :3

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    patricklad

    A wonderful read indeed, the synopsis Alone had me hooked. The author did a magnificent work in his world building, one of the best system novels I've read out here[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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    Jeanne_59

    I'm new to reading and this novel seems interesting to me, I'll be fan number one hahaha

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