/ Horror / Untouched by the Outbreak
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Ryo Tanaka, a struggling college student, works tirelessly at multiple part-time jobs to make ends meet. In a bid to earn some extra cash, he volunteers for a paid drug research study, unaware that it will alter the course of his life forever.
The experiment takes a disastrous turn, leaving Ryo bedridden with a high fever for several days. But when he finally awakens, he finds himself in a world plunged into chaos. A deadly virus has ravaged the city, turning its inhabitants into ravenous, flesh-eating zombies. Streets once bustling with life now lay desolate, the remnants of civilization crumbling under the weight of the apocalypse.
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Viết đánh giáWell,to be honest,early story is good,Its not really that bad in the middle,but i think,this story is good for me.I was hoping you could detail more on certain part.Just my personal review,i think it worth unlock the chapter.By the way,keep up the work.
The start was nice, the background was actually interesting for me but the chapters were so short, and most of them were like fillers that you could skip and it won’t affect the story. The dialog of the characters were boring. Sorry but this is not for me. I wish you good luck author. I hope you improve and if possible you can rewrite the novel when that time comes.
Hard to read. I sense chat gpt or some grammar AI. Not enough dialogue that brings any life to the story. I literally skimmed several chapters and only found the MC slightly talking to himself. Story itself may be good but it needs dialogue and edits. Also a ton of repeated information thats annoying to read. Honest thoughts.
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
OK, so I have read all the way to chapter 87, and all I can say is why. why did the girls have to die just like that? Do they come back? i see the system in the Tage, so maybe through that, but if not, I don't think I can continue. I hope ur story works out, though
Tiết lộ SpoilerTác giả Jacksen_Bent
The starting is good.In the middle,so so,but the more i read,its getting better.I love they way you create a part where his lover dead.And i love how Ryo,your main character become after that.I like it when you make your character become aware on how selfish human can be on the zombie appocalypse.Well i was hoping this story getting better and better.Dont dissapoint me.