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Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System
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The Main Character Soren was *Cough Cough* in a car when an accident happened, he was then killed and brought in front of God. God gave him 3 wishes, his wishes had some restrictions but he wished for a System that in connected to every Anime in the Multiverse and now he travels getting stronger to become a God himself,
This is my first one of these type of Novels and I do not own any of the Anime or materials used except my Character, I only made this to improve writing skills.
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News! Please Read before reading!!*
If you found this fiction lacking in quality or want to see something done differently, I'm remaking this fanfic to add more to the story, as well as visit other worlds and anime, I'm taking suggestions of worlds to visit, so instead of going the same exact route with a dialogue change, I want to visit worlds like Demon Slayer, or Reincarnated as a Smile, or MCU, or DC, or any other worlds you feel are interesting and will add a sense of freshness to this already finished and outdated fiction. I'm doing this to make a better fiction as well as to try and get more inspiration to create new fictions, so come with me on this journey one more time, as I hope to make it longer and more encompassing, as well as add more detail as I am noticing while going through the early chapters I rushed quite a lot of the story just to get to parts I enjoyed while watching the Anime's. Give me your thoughts, I might even go to the Rick and Morty universe to grab some of Rick's tech and blow some shit up. Also, I don't want to limit the Harem this time, but I also don't want to just catch em all to have a bunch of onaholes, I want to build proper character relationships, so look forward to more than just r18 scenes with the women being silent and out of the picture the rest of the time.
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Hey all. I will be trying to make each worlds time spent, around 20 to 35 chapters each. There might be worlds with less chapters but those will be filler chapters. I hope you all enjoy the novel!
It's too cheesy. This is too generic. The main character has a flip flop personality and never stays consistent. The author doesn't know how to write complex characters. He completely makes a disgrace of what the original creators of the licenses intended. For example, Aizen turns into a hot-headed buffoon who reacts on emotions while Ichigo turns into a submissive moron. He turns Shanks into an unintelligent idiot while he turns White Beard into... Well, he's still vaguely White Beard. Another problem that I had is that the author decided to make a love interest pop up out of nowhere just for the sake of having a love interest. She has a generic loli personality that you would see repeated constantly in other terrible FanFictions. The author obviously doesn't know how to write any type of romance, but yet continuously forces the reader to read about his garbage fire of a relationship, leaving us to cringe until our faces turn inside out. Then, he has the nerve to go the harem route! He can't even write one female character right, let alone multiple! I feel from my experience of reading 100 chapters that the author doesn't exactly know what he wants the story to be. He also doesn't know who he wants his character to be, which makes for terrible storytelling and character development. I wouldn't read this again. I would rather go outside and do something with my life... Which i guess is a good thing.
Sorry Dude but after about 20 chaps I coun not take it anymore, your Mc gets tortured by his own family, but still calls them mom and Dad. He knew what was coming, had his wishes and still he goes along with this crap. Story itself is ok but I just can't take the Mc and his borderline stupid personality, it's OK to have a Mc that is not ultra vindictive but just not caring that you get beaten is just plain hard to read for me because it's just not realistic, not even I a fantasy setting.
This is worst and irritating fanfic to read with an annoying mc.. This is really surprising that lot of people voted on this crap. Author wants other mc to get stronger than his mc so he will let his mc train the original mc and then in just a short time the original mc is already stronger than him?? THATS STTUPIIDDDD. GO TO HELL MOTHERFVKER!
I like it very much unlike other fanfic where the MC would straight off get's a harem just because they're beautiful I mean I get that they're beautiful and all but it'll slow down the MC'S progress because he have to train his harem and fight other People stronger than himself while protecting his harem's which I find stupid I know some people find it ok but for me personally I just want an MC that get the job done than getting harem and stuff But still tho I like this novel and I just hope the author won't drop it tho cuz other fanfic author just dropped it and leaving a cliffhanger which I really don't like.
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Well not sure what to say. This novel actually has 4.6 stars rating in 112 reviews? Come on. Novel is bad in every way possible, also the writing quality gets a negative five (-5) stars from me. Just 15 chapters in and my eyes hurt already.
First the mc is like ***** in heat for male characters of the anime Second the mc follows the anime story too Much There is no new experience in the story Third i think the autor is also gay because the death of mc is stupid his OWN Dick in mouth when hé dies its like the autor wants to experience the same thing 🤢🤢🤮🤮
* My native language is not English, I am just using "GOOGLE TRANSLATOR" * * {I'm going to chapter 15, but I couldn't bear to continue reading, such SHIT} * This story has a lot of errors and inconsistencies, I honestly don't understand why it has "4.6 stars", (I'm going to make it clear that I'm halfway through the hunterxhunter arc, but I can't stand it anymore the character is **** and not normal **** a FUCK !!!!) if I start writing the errors I will reach the limit of characters, for which I will only say some. -COVER PICTURE: Let's be honest that image that has the cover of the book is FUCK. -SYSTEM AND WISHES (in the hunterxhunter arc he has only made a wish, what outrages me is the use he makes of the system, being able to buy OP skills, buy bloodlines that give him cooking skills ... it's a SHIT): no I am against saving wishes, which is actually very good, but it pisses me off that it doesn't use the system, it only uses it to see its state (which doesn't make sense, for two things; first it has a value of VERY high luck compared to an average person and even so it is the friends [Leorio] who handle the girls, and second because the values increase in a very proportional way [100 -> 300] which is illogical, being able to buy skills which in a world like hunterxhunter would be very OP, an example would be the ROKUSHIKI of the one piece world. -TRAMA: it shows too much that the author got the fanfiction from between the ass, because the plot is ****, I am reading the part of the hunterxhunter arc where Leorio gropes the girl psychologist, murderer and still does not mention the sister of the MC (which should be the same sister of Killua), in addition the author makes the MC follow the plot of the story, being able to have used the knowledge of the plot to make the story more interesting, for example he could have trained NEN with Wing (free), but the MC pushed him away and ignored him when he was just trying to get closer, which is stupid the MC could have treated him well and made friends with him (it's better to have friends than enemies), I'm not trying to say that he became Wing's "girlfriend", only he could have been a friendly acquaintance. - CHARACTERS: the author does not know how to create characters and take them through the story, an example is killua, to which the MC transmitted his mental deficiencies.
It had good potential but was ruined by idiotic decisions and nerfs. Really frustrating to read MC make stupid decisions and lose power just to make the plot convenient.
Maybe I am being baised and putting a fake review just because I like reading this and am too busy rereading it to give a proper review? Thank you for not putting "lemon or H scenes" in the novel. I like having something I can read to my sibling and recommend to family members. Keep up the great work.
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This is a cringe worthy work. It feels like a novel written for 10 year old kids to shoe friendships and family bonds. expect authors just shove in the face with bad story development. This is just bad writing the only reason it can be given time to be read is cause its a fan fiction. One of the worst useless fan fiction I have ever read.
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Eu sempre começo a ler uma fanfic com paciência e sem esperar muito já que fanfics são geralmente escritas por autores novatos, então mesmo quando tem muitos erros e a história tá cheias de buracos eu ainda tento ser compreensivo, mas teve uns erros nessa que me deram vontade de dropar vários vezes. 1° A primeira esposa foi SUPER forçado, parece que o autor queria agradar os leitores que pediram romance, mas não se esforçou pra desenvolver relação dela com o MC, ele apenas a criou do nada e fez ela se apaixonar pelo MC por um motivo superficial, se fosse pra fazer assim era melhor ter deixado ele solteiro. 2° Quando o autor deu uma nerfada no MC antes do mundo de One Piece eu entendi, ele já era muito forte e não teria oponentes pra ele em One Piece sem ser nerfado antes, mas a maneira que o autor o nerfou foi muito forçado, do nada um 'world eater' o atacou é em vez de fugir e ouvir o quê o sistema falou ele tenta luta igual um idiota. Deve que o autor não tinha um método melhor pra nerfar o MC (*suspiro*) 3• O requisito pra ele poder viajar pra outro mundo de animes e se tornar o ser mais forte no mundo que tá atualmente, mas o autor ignorou esse requisito no mundo de Bleach, ele apenas derrotou o Aizen (antes dele pegar o Hōgyoku) de uma maneira muito sem graça, afinal ele era um dos maiores antagonistas do anime mas o MC o derrotou de uma maneira que não condizem com a história, foi muito fácil, e só porque derrotou o Aizen e o comandante do Gotei 13 Yamamoto ele foi considerado o mais forte daquele mundo já podendo ir pra outro, mas quem é fã de Bleach sabe que existe muitos mais personagem mais fortes que Yamamoto, um desses pode ser o Rei da alma que nunca apareceu ou o grande vilão Yhwach que era quase impossível ser morto. Também existe muitas personagens feminina legais que ele podia por no harém do MC, mas ele decidiu inventar uma, e forçar ela como 1° esposa, quase dropei. Também podia reclamar de porque ele não pegou o Hōgyoku, mesmo que ele não podia usar ainda poderia vender pro sistema por pontos, afinal ele aceitou a licença hunter em troca de pontos porque não aceitaria o Hōgyoku também já que e um dos objetos mais fortes da série. 4° O momento que me deu mais vontade de dropar foi quando ele apagou a paixão que Hancock tinha pelo Luffy só pra por ela no harém, além de manipular a mente dela pra esquecer Luffy o autor nem se deu ao trabalho de desenvolver um pouco a relação dela com MC antes dela se apaixonar por ele, ele apenas chegou nela curou sua marca de escravo e ela automaticamente se apaixonou por ele, super forçado, ele podia ter posto a Robin ou outro na harém mas preferiu ir na Hancock manipular a mente dela só porque acha ela gostosa. O autor não sabe fazer o MC fletar com a mulher para a seduzir e por no harém, toda vez ele usa um método forçado, acho que o autor ainda não sabe ser mais 'suave'. -ELOGIO?: cara, não consigo pensar num elogio pra essa fanfic, talvez o único elogio que posso dar é que essa não é a pior fanfic que já li, isso conta como elogio?
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Full of unnecessary BS. Nerfs the Mc too much from world traveling and power lvl explanation is messy. Up to the point I read I think the Mc is gay lol don't bother reading this
Try to improve your writing skill dude,and pay attention cause some time you will make some misspelling. 3 Stars for your aspiration to write this novel thought. Keep up the good work and good luck.
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V nice the start was shaky but a lot better loving the hunter x hunter saga hope it lasts longer and dose not suddenly leave for a new world and leave us hanging