/ Anime & Comics / Tokyo Ghoul: Aberration
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A guy dies in an accident and was lucky to get reincarnated in a world of his choice with some wishes.
Honestly never thought anyone would ever read this.
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Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
not written well, feels way to rushed, and pretty difficult to understand.............,........................ .....
5 star ⭐️ Is fake, if anyone wonders. The Fanfic is not worth it, if you disagree read it.&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& &&&&&&
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hey, you make a good story your outline is good only the vocabulary has some mistakes or typos, and a lack of usage! -! -, -? - which makes dialogue sometimes seem bland without emotion, also lacks design descriptions of the characters ... oh and ... mm nevermind. That's all I want to say, fix those mistakes and your story will well developed.Tu vas bien, j'adore ton histoire 🙂.
10/10 loving it keep it up author-san ..................................................................................................................................
Ñ vou mentir e dizer que é a melhor história. Mas eu me diverti ao ler ,de uma chance ao livro.................................................
No. The autor just changed the personalitties of the others characters just because he wants the mc to get next to them. The characters just seems like a dolls, they don't have opinnion and nothing like this. Even the way that they act is different then the original.
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It is very rushed i recommend going back and adding more background details and also adding more interesting and emotional chacter interaction because the interaction between people is very bland.
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meh, it dosent flow very well. very flat and plain. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
More pls i beg you pls PlS for real good Fanfic jfkgjfjjjfjrjrjdhdhdjdhhdhdhdrjhdhdhhfhffjjfhdhdbdbdbdbxbbdbdnsjdhdhdhdbdb so i can post this
Good start Finally a tokyo ghoul fanfiction with good potential 🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷 Bon debut Enfin une fanfiction de tokyo ghoul avec un bon potentiel 🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷🇫🇷
Not only is there Is zero character development but it also just seemed so rushed. We Know basicly nothing about the mc and the other characters are also acting completely different then they should just mindless characters. I dont recommend.