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Through the Dao of Writing I Walk - With Convenience as My Companion

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As Shen Zhuo's spirit walked through the void, silent meditating figures emerged.

Then, amidst then, its' blue skin in white and gold adorned, came the voice of Krsna:

- Oh issue, to the abode of god thou has't cometh. chooseth now a life of plenty and abundance, or one of pain and sorrow. beest careful, for no second chance may i giveth thee.

Faced with gods' might, his heart shook. However, still he mantained calmness and bowed his head.

- Blessed be the god.

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zd4zaasa

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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LordFifththeThird

So far it seems pretty well thought out and interesting. I’m honestly looking forward to how it progresses. The first two chapters have very interesting grammaryou could say but after that the grammar becomes more normal and easier to understand I suppose. I’m interested in how the MC will develop. Will he remember his time in the void? How about writing? That’s very interesting because it’s seldom or almost never used as a protagonists form of cultivation, so I’m excited for that.

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theFred
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Hmm, I'm scared to read this. If its Dao of Writing, it is probably boring if compared to the Dao of Writting (since 'writting' is the urban slang for a girl masturbating) which would be a whole different kind of interesting. So I think I'll leave this one alone for a while and see which way this goes first. :) What I still haven't written enough to get this to post? Sheesh maybe I should have started reading it so I could point this out in a comment instead.

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Tác giả Desmond_Desfables