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The Warrior Mage of Westeros
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After defeating Voldemort, warrior Harry Potter is unexpectedly transported to Winterfell, where he encounters Ned Stark and his companions. Despite initial uncertainties, Ned offers Harry refuge at Winterfell. However, Harry soon discovers that his journey is far from over as he navigates the complexities of life in Westeros and confronts new challenges alongside the Stark family.
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I’m pretty sure it’s AI writing. Not that it’s bad or anything, but the flowery writing style feels a bit too fake and a little aggravating. It’s like I’m reading a story about AI masquerading as humans in a world made by AI. I don’t know, like CGI almost in the way it makes me feel.
it's pretty good story but mc sits on his a*s for 6 month doing almost nothing. But let's hope when he will get his land and castle mc does some kingdom-building in his territory. And let hope that author doesn't kill Robert and Ned later like all other authors do.
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I needed to drop this because it’s obviously written with AI, the style of AI - the repetitions and just plain mistakes that come with it just make it unreadable in my opinion.
I can’t remember the original before this started to be reposted but there are some weird things going on with the story. For example the time Harry arrives seems it should be fairly close to when GOT starts but then in later chapters references things and people interactions that should never had time to happen or meet the MC. If this isn’t AI driven then it’s pretty bad copy/pastes from original posting as it seems like things got cut out but didn’t fix the paragraphs so it makes sense. Still interesting concept and grammatically correct for most part at least. Describing the same thing or same dialogue in multiple paragraphs kinda gets repetitive and boring though.
Everything is happening very easily, I mean starks accepted a unknown that is magical in nature without any problem. Lady Stark would have been caution the moment she is made aware of Harry's magical nature because she is a worshiper of religion of seven, it will be very hard for her to accept anything that is against seven. Harry is to trusting in telling his life story to a stranger he knows only for a day. And they are already on first name basis without using lady and lord, sir.