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Austin Blake, an ordinary man in all terms, lucked out in a situation and gets reincarnated in the body of nineteen-year-old Zephyr Lynx.

He gains an a ability no one was supposed to have

But like we all know, Nothing comes for free.

Follow him on his adventures and explorations across various galaxies, all the while gaining allies, making enemies, and being hunted down.

This is a story about a man whose actions shall affect the Cosmos in its entirety.

A man with two clear paths to chose from, now which will he choose;

Shall he bring down carnage on all

OR

Will he save those on the path of destruction.

Read to find out.

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Note: This is my first novel, so don't expect it to be perfect

Hit me complaints and suggestions at;

Discord : discord.gg/FpBqWR7Pzf


But please, if it's a complaint, make sure it's relevant to the novel and

if it's a suggestion make sure it's in line with the elements of the novel

Release rate: 3-4 Chapters per week


Words per chapter: 1100-1800


So if you like my book, just make sure to tell others to read it too.

Disclaimer: I don't own the cover.

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LucidBlue

Honestly, I can't say it's special, unique, or interesting, but it exists and it's not complete unreadable. With minimal effort, one can discover several grammatical issues. Spelling is off in some areas, incorrectly used words in other spots, and simple misuse of punctuation. It didn't seem completely awful, but after reading a few chapters, I wasn't captivated, nor interested by anything. I wish you luck in your writing; with experience, you would improve.

3yr
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Penless

I must say that this book is quite interesting. The world that he was reincarnated to is also great and I could already tell that this world is an expanding world. The things that bother me, are lacking description or explanation to some things. And also on how fast the event happens. I like fast pace story but this one is quite faster. It still needs to explain more the events to avoid confusing the readers. Nonetheless, it is still 'munchable' to read.

3yr
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Daoist404039

Buena historia ya me piqué me parece que inici con fuerza para bajar la velocidad del desarrollo del personaje, empezar muy fuerte para después perder todo ese poder y empezar en el inicio e irse desarrrollando, la habilidad de desintegre y absorber habría sido muy bien usada pero probablemente la quitaron ya que sería tan fuerte que no batallaría a lidiar con oponentes así que le quitaría dificultades y trama

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