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Tác giả: Emma_Khae

4.72 (10 số lượng người đọc)

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Alexander Gray, a fifteen-year-old teenager on the verge of his awakening and subsequent entry into the Hunters Academy is one day taken away in a cosmic mana wave that passes through Earth’s solar system during a school trip from Earth to Mars. A wave that kills a person once exposed to it.

Luckily, the displacement wave placed him close to their destination where he was found, alive and well to the disbelieve of everybody.

Unbeknownst to him at the time, the cosmic mana wave had awakened a gift within him that would propel him to the ranks of hero hunter and beyond, granting him the strength to lead humanity in their effort to determine the cause of their universe changing and its implications.
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"For some reason, I can't level up." Alex began to feel frustrated as he was stuck at Class F, the lowest rank a hunter could have after awakening, despite his momentum when he first awakened.

Even with his awakened talents and the benefits he received from the 'accident' that should have killed him, he now finds himself stuck and unable to level up as mana does not work on him like everyone else.

Follow Alexander Gray as he discovers his abilities and learns about himself in a chaotic universe and beyond.
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    NashP7
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    Overall this is extremely enjoyable with good pacing as well as being well written. The core trio introduced are really interesting, their dynamic is in its early stages but it’s already growing stronger. Theres also some really strong world building early on, it makes you have more questions for what’s to come further down the line and doesn’t give you all the answers, just enough to really build your interest. I like how Alex’s powers work differently than everyone else and he’s having to figure out how to best make use of them too. I highly recommend this, well worth your time!

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    Emma_Khae

    Full marks obviously... Haa... so my second review so far. We're over 160 chapters in and I feel I've found my writing style. So if you've read till chapter 160-ish, you should be able to tell. Finally, leave a review once you get there.

    2mth
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    Emma_Khae

    Hi my dear readers I think it's time I said something small about the book. While it feels slow paced right now, the fun will be coming in very soon. Great stories take time to mould and tell. So, hang in there and support me as we explore the universe of Alexander Gray.

    3mth
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    Harry108

    Read until chapter 33: I like the world's building and sci fi setting. It feels a little slow paced. Maybe it's too early to give a review. But still giving none the less. I hope this turns out to be a great novel. Best of luck Mr. Author.

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    unfinished_senten

    "Solid read! The story flows smoothly, and the characters are easy to connect with. I found myself invested in what happens next. Looking forward to more from this writer. Keep it up!" [img=Feeling it]

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    Harry108

    I like the concept and world. But it's missing a certain sense of horror elements. It feels too much of a slice of life instead of a sci fi genre with world ending threats..(My personal opinion)

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    Indian_Painter

    Writing quality: 7/10 Decent , but requires some clarity in the narration and the author also overdescribes unnecessary things not need for the plot to progress. It would be better if the author uses shorter paragraphs since the longer ones do make reading monotonous and slow paced in general during an intense scene. Updates 10/10: He updates daily at the time of review Story 7/10: Decent plot points and story. A side note (Personal thing) could have started with a inciting event to hook your readers. Then explain how he ended up there. Character 7/10: Decent cast of characters. Dialogs 7.5/10: Could filter out the filler words (he said, etc.) in some areas. The exchange doesn't seem much monotonous and robot-like, although it could improve it's clarity and variety when other characters are speaking. Grammar 8/10 - decent It's a decent read with a okayish plot. The author is definitely improving his writing, as i could see the quality slightly getting better when we move on. Definitely give it a try -Indian_Painter

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    Emelia_Sena

    Hehe... A personal friend of mine. i literally see him type everyday and decided to finally check out the results. And I'm liking the novel already. You should give it a try and also check his other books. Go Emma!

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    Aaron_Lanidune

    I wonder where the genetics book went, hopes author brings it back. Anyways, the concept behind this novel is just as good and I’ve enjoyed what I’ve seen so far… Definitely recommend it. Keep writing.[img=recommend]

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    Henry_Boadu

    My first book on webnovel and this story ciaght my eye with its unqie world and concept. I like how Alex has a completely different power system from everyone else and I hope to see how far he gets and the changes he will bring.[img=recommend]

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