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Before I woke up, I had a dream about the end of the world. At first, it felt like a vivid nightmare that left me shaken. But as I slowly woke up, I realized that the dream was the pre-ending scene of my own novel.
I am Zio Varrez, an unnamed character in my own book, and to my disappointment, an extra. As I lived in my novel's world, I couldn't help but feel that my existence was meaningless. But what made it worse was the fact that the ending of my book was the end of the world - a bad ending.
I knew I had to do something to become strong enough to change the world's fate, even if it meant altering the story I once knew completely. Little did I know, there was more to this world than I realized, and the journey I was about to embark on would uncover secrets that I never even imagined.
"I thought I knew everything about the world, but as I lived and experienced it, I realized there was so much more to it than I ever imagined."
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Author note: The story is going on rather slow pace, expect the boredom for the early 60 chapters
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I'm back... with bad news. So, my laptop was broken and my phone was stolen during the vacation I mentioned before this novel stopped updating. The drafts and outlines for this novel were in my laptop but it's broken now and I recently get it replacement. However, I didn't back up and can't recover the data from my old one so now I lost all my drafts and decided to go on a long long break... or I might abandon this one. That's it. Thank you all for the support!
Story is fine, but writing quality is bad. The mc is smiling one second and sighing the next. Bro has mood swings or smth. Also, the mc has a Ex rank skill but it’s basically useless. It’s an Ex rank appraisal skill but it doesn’t tell him anything. He also has dual wielding skill, as expected of the mc. So generic smh. You could’ve given him three sword style or smth, then at least it would be more unique and he can be like Zoro. Most ironic of all, the author pokes fun of others for using the “Oh no I changed the plot too much” trope, but doesn’t do anything unique themselves. It’s just another copy of every other transmigrating into their own novel stuff. It’s decent if you like this kind of stuff though.
Reading up to chapter 30. So far, the story is good, but there are a lot of questions unanswered. Can't wait for what would happen after all the hints given in the early chapter are revealed. A bit annoying when the main character is thinking too much and comparing too much what happens between the original plot and the reality. But I guess it's his personality.
This story is full of cliche like- " oh I seem to know this character but I can't remember" Note:- mc is the author of novel. still he forgot the top figure of novel who betrayed humanity to demon in his own fking novel... and he remembered through a dream.... but story is okey I mean little above average... but I am still at chapter 10... and also it have cliche of mc not having previous owner memory still somehow his cousions who lived with him for years did not recognize him and also his family is mistryous and people are hiding from him infomation about his own fking family when they know that he forgot ... I mean we all know that its gonna come back to bite mc again in future .. but rest is okey about story....
So far this book has been ok I mean it’s average but sometimes average is good. The characters are not fleshed out as other stories but it is only the beginning so I can’t be too harsh on the book. If you are looking for something to read that doesn’t have harem and overpowered systems then read this. I have read mannnnnny books like this and they are dropped or become loved so I hope the author doesn’t lose his passion.
Character is good, idk abt update stab. World background is just too much, more like info dump for me (readers). Almost every chapt that the mc feels sus abt something, the mc would suddenly shrug it off and thinks it might just be him overthinking or some unreasonable reason brought by the author. My recent encounter of this is ch 124 "Although he failed to inspect the man, he had no intention to chase him. He probably grinned because he felt like it and Zio thought he was too paranoid and worried because the new year's night when the demon would announce themselves to the world was a few days away.". Author forcing mc to be smart for mc to benefit from something like getting connections to ppl for mc to take advantage of them, then moments later acts stupid and shrug off things that are suspicious to everyone's naked eye. The planned plot is good, I'm give you that. The only thing is some turn of events are force coz author seemed unable to find a way to make the events natural. (most noticeable is events like what I mentioned earlier where MCs iq becomes questionable because—acted smart, then later plain stupid.) I think it's not only me who noticed this but I didn't see anyone pointing this out which made me question WHY. I don't hate the book, but I hope for it to be fixed. I'll be reading more and see more of Author's work development.
The book starts off okay but a lot of little annoyances start to quickly spiral out of control. The MC gets a pretty powerful ability, Clairvoyance, which is frankly necessary considering his abysmal starting stats. What follows this is the author randomly buffing and nerfing the mc for almost no reason at all, or any good reason in my opinion. there is a weird backstory about the mc being more powerful when he was like 8 years old, which literally just makes zero sense and somehow his potential also got nerfed? Even more idiotic than this is the author just introducing this easy to make solution to improve anyone's potential and decides to just make the MC sell it worldwide?? You're telling me this nigh unbreakable wall determined at birth can just be circumvented by a potion you could essentially find for the same price as a honda accord? Maybe a rangerover but still. If his potential was raised through a daunting challenge I could understand but it just feels very lazy as a whole. Just some Bulletpoints as I don't want to type too much: . Why does the MC have a magic talent but in about an entire year he has taken one class on how to control magic, nevermind even creating spells and exploring an incredibly interesting side of combat. Please just get him a teacher maybe even ask the headmaster. . Why is the MC talking to a ghost who looks like a real person as well as somehow a random cat? this just makes no sense this has been going on for way too long with almost no resolution and is just getting confusing and annoying. . Why does Emma exist? Why hype up the original MC of the story and cast to just completely bring the story in a different direction and add people the MC has no idea about whom are just the most talented people to walk the earth?? Why do I know the names of 10 or so side characters who are basically never mentioned for the real plot of stopping the demons. The original MC has been used in like one fight and everything else is just characters where you have no idea what they're thinking or planning, but oh wait they like the MC because of this situation 3 years ago, that somehow has more secrecy than area 51 and the author refuses to tell you much about. What's the point of this cast you've built up if every single one of them just hides what they're thinking but dw they like the MC. It just makes it so hard to like and relate to characters aside from the original ones, who are rarely properly used. Could say more but sorry this is way too long lol.
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average novel with interesting plot idea, but poor writing. the way conflicts evolve and then solve themselves is unbearable.
I am telling you this is a good read. I don't know why isn't it well-known yet but it's really Good 😊 I'll 💯 recommend it. Zio character is well designed and I love his other persona and novel has a bit of mysterious vibe. Read this and thank me later.
When reading this novel, u should not presume the same cliche ideas that is similar to the author's pov. It's different and oma gad the sheer roller coaster of a ride this novel takes u is amazing....trully. Give it a chance....u won't regret it.
I love this novel but the writing especially in battle is horrible i skip most of them please read gameing novel or manga to make the battle better and faster without using wired English words use RPG game words I don’t mind a romantic relationship between csoin as god allow it I don’t know what’s worng with Americans but it’s very normal thing, i hope you not changing anything you had plan for both of them because of what they say so keep going but please make the writing in fights simpler and better I’m keen to his novel please keep going
The story is quite good. When I started reading this book never expected anything more than average. But, this is more than what I've expected. Best of luck, hope you can continue writing and iam looking forward for more chapters.
Overall quite a good plot but sometimes it is like a skip in event such as Mc tried to see past of Ember but failed and directly it goes to next event.Overall it is quite a good story.
fantastic read ( nice world building ) Also a new type of dungeon that I haven't heard of so nice 😀
Please don’t drop it i never read any novel with such unprecedented story i wishes if you have more time with the characters thier POV about what HAD happened around them and they opinion of each other ect that the only issue with this novel that theirs not enough of it fortunately that didn’t effect the novel that much..
Shameless author's review here~ It's been a month since this series first started. And here I'd like to give a bit of insight through QnA. So, the frequently asked questions are: Q: Is this harem? A: Nope, single FL. Though there may be a precious moment (not romantically or sexually, just friendly) with other female characters. Q: Is MC a good guy or a bad guy? (heroes or villain) A: Neither. MC's a bit complex (which is what I planned to do). He doesn't care which side he was in, as long as he could achieve his goals. (Pragmatism MC) Could be a double agent, or even a triple agent lol. Q: Is MC OP? A: It's weak to strong MC. But, of course, with the knowledge he has, at least he is equal to or better than his peers (Those that rank the gap not too wide) If there are other questions you'd like to ask, just reply to this. I'll answer that question. Don't expect a spoiler answer though~