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"So you expect me to believe that God is a toddler?"
"You don't have to believe me, but just know that once I breakthrough you will get to see it for yourself."
As I finished telling her about how I got here in the first place, I couldn't help but think about all the years that have passed since I became what others call The Undying Saiyan.
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Well, I decided to practice writing, so any critiques are welcomed. Just a heads up don't expect anything good since I pretty much write when I'm feeling dead inside.
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Cover art does not belong to me. I got it from
https://displate.com/xynthymr/dragon-ball
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You guys know the usual with these fake author reviews. Wait, I need more characters well ****... Still not enough huh? I guess I'll write more nonsense.
So... it possess a good beginning but it when the 12th chapter arrive it's turn in a confusing mess where a chapter doesn't follow the previous one. But Since its has a good beginning it gave it this score. You could think of it as a short story.
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story is a little interesting but i think that intead of a stupidly op mom....A system would suffice. plus without orphan background or something along the lines the MC is just too restrained. its like im reading a training montage not a novel. I especially hate such arrogant and stupid people and the mother is just plain stupid. she doesnt even add to story. just some plain info and thats it. why was she even included? Character dev? B.S! she is just existing in the story....truly useless neither she is weak so that she can potentially become a hostage nor she is motherly. just a commonplace bitch who is simply too fking stupid
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