The System: Pureblood Gamer

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MellowFellow

I don't know anything about this novel, but I'm sure it will give the best reading experience. I like your writings style. So, LEEEEEETTSSSS GOOOOOOOOOOO! !!!!! !!!!!!!!!! !

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THE_RED_FURY

I recommend that if you are going to read this be prepared for a system of disgust that instead of helping puts you more problems and an idiotic and childish mc despite having oclumency and that HP universe is completely different with many incredibly irrelevant, boring and with OCs. bland missions

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Hunter_101

I don't get it I read a little it good story but he's not reincarnated so he's a native of that wold and since he's the Last in line of his house so he should have ben properly tought and he's staying whit a pureblood family so why does he act like Ron or sume muggleborn he lacs etiquette.....

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Konrad_The_Fourth

Lemons? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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RandomReader12

set on an AU harry potter timeline, it is very interesting and has potential especially because the mc is pureblood and has a system which could assist him.

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Edone

I have red this one before on fanfiction though it was about Harry alone no Alex and it was not complete but was really good I don't know if you copy paste it with changes but since y started don't drop

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Daoist781977

I have to say this is a relly good start their is a lot of good things this can do. keep up the good work you willl have my support. Good luck!!

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Archonstine

It's been pretty good til now, so keep it up I guess. I have following your Naruto fan fiction, so I have high hopes for this one. Only thing, can you make the chapters a bit longer? Just a bit? Cause I finish reading one in less than a minute. Just a suggestion, not a complaint.

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THE_Bird

it is an incredible idea for a story, from the prologue I think this is like a story of what truly happened in the war. I really hope the author doesn't drop it and, while I am by no means trying to tell them what to do, or implying that I could do it better. I just want to ensure that the story continues as much as possible. if the author is bored I hope they know that they can time skip until they are interested in the story again.

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alesjandritos

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one of the better harry potter fanfic i have read at now, cant wait for an update

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KATAKURIROX

What can I say, I like the concept. Hopefully you complete this unlike your Naruto fan-fiction where you kind of left everyone hanging. Anyways, good luck and keep it up.

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Phoenix1998

Nice chapters. Is greengrass stealing from him? If so he should try to get emancipated fast. Nice chapters. Is greengrass stealing from him? If so he should try to get emancipated fast.

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storm_xt

Its a great book and I would recommend it to most, it has okay and legible grammar which is hard to find as webnovel is spammed by machine translated light novels and fan fics. As for the plot, its okay I guess at least its not some trash reincarnation fic, as for the mc he is okay not like god tier but he is not unlikeable idk if there is a harem but I hope not peace out.

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carloschingakham

this story is some what interesting to me . I think that t will be a great story if you are able to finish the story................😀😀😆😀😆😆😆

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YoucanCallmeVENTI

Bro its a good story and your naruto one is also missed a lot. Just Don't drop it and update frequently. Rest all is amazing and I hope you find enough free time to update this one

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BrotherGrey

awesome has some work that needs to do but it very good hope to continue to read it