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THE SAINT'S LINEAGE
4.58 (40 số lượng người đọc)
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Jake is a loner surviving within the streets of Avalon City. A city filled with bullies and lowlifes always making his life miserable and forcing him to have thoughts of giving on his life.
The hand of fate played itself and his life was turned around by a surprise encounter with a wounded super-human.
An artifact was provided and the saint's bloodline was inherited.
What does life hold for him in the future?
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The story progression is good. Give it a try. I think most of the fantasy lovers will like the way it progresses.
I didnt read much, there where too many things not adding up in the story. wierd how it has soo many 4+ star raitings. From what is written seems to be his stats start out at those of healthy adult yet he takes 3 hours to run 5 miles, average walking speed is 3mph and that is taking into account unhealthy people. Stats are wrong every other chapter. Then when he is barley stronger than the average he procceds to beat up 3 people who have atleast some figthing experience since they are bullies, while im assuming he has 0 since author wrote he either runs away or escapes from then
to tell you the truth readers.. This is definitely not recommend novel because the writing quality Is so worse even me that has almost 4 years reading experience Chinese,Japanese, english novel i already experience it how terrible Chinese translation are... This novel is worse than Chinese novel it seem 16 years old maybe or lower maybe write it and just quite new at english language. And i hate quite story development because it was so fast as if the heaven helping him or lets just say in Chinese Novels "World Law" as if he was heaven child and i hate system too... because it came from the system power he was just like low exercise and get multiple ℅ strength i mean it came from system power and even knowledge why don't you just give him op knowledge like level 1 dont have knowledge suddenly have heaven defying knowledge because of unknow encounter even people didn't know ya know what i mean i will not explain anymore because it was wasting my knowledge even it can only last 24 chapter as if this is masterpiece but not really because of the writing quality
the author should check his work or have a editor look it up. it seems some chapters are from a different book of his called agis or something plus he some times gets the main character Jake name mixed up with Leon from the other book.. the whole Stat thing gets kinda ridiculous and over used same with the calling oit of techniques but its tolerable all in all I like the book so far. I think I'm on ch.113 I will continue to read.
spelling atrocious author too lazy to attempt fixing dropping it till it's fixed if ever
okay the main character's name I couldn't actually read that much kept changing every other paragraph between Jake and Leon. the HP made no sense he had zero for a couple system updates for a while and then had 10 out of 100. the exercise routine made zero sense but that wasn't the main issue at one point at the beginning he ran 5 mi in 3 hours that is so slow. I just the random writing errors were driving me nuts. admittedly it's not awful story there's some stuff that just doesn't make sense and add up well but it's not bad I'm just very frustrated.
Honestly couldn’t get more than a few chapters in due to no proof reading to find all the easily spotted fat finger typing? Random characters in words random letters in others. That’s without the normal mistaken words because English, and the main characters name bouncing back and forth between Jake and Leon
Ok there’s 2 major issues in this book that I know for a fact a lot of readers drop books for so if you can’ t get past these there’s no point reading this book.. First is the system basically making the character a slave it will do whatever it wants and will punish the Mc if he doesn’t listen this is a hard no for a lot of people.. especially considering the fact that if the Mc wanted to in this book he could actually threaten the system in this book… but that’s on you if your ok with the Mc having basically no choice over any of his actions in the future… The second major issue is the ungodly amount of grammatical errors…. These range from mistakes in states misspelled words and straight up forgetting which book the autho is even writing since his MCs names certainly get mixed up… Now if those don’t make you wanna drop the book then yes it’ an alright read if you have some free time I would man however reccomend reading it unless it’s on the daily free books since the author hasn’t put in nearly enough effort for anything else
I am still continuing the series but I am concerned about the author's update rate. He is not updating continously for a long time. Somtimes he does and sometime he doesn't. That is the only concern.
I like the way the story has developed even after reading for a klong time. The writer's point of view is interesting . While the writing quality is a bit down since there are a lot of grammar errors, but overall this is a story which is worth reading
who the f is Leon?, definitely needs some editing. I assume the mc was named Leon in a previous draft, also there is a chapter way out of order ,.......................
The plot development iS good one. I hope the author is able top continue this work and provide a unique arc to the story. can't wait to read more./
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The progression is good. Increasing the power too suddenly would give a sense of fabrication. I just hope that there could be more stories with female counterparts with the same power levels as this.
i have been reading it up and the progression is good. i recommend reader give it a try since it might actually lead to something amazing.