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Modern technology improves day by day... Until It came to the point where people could talk to each other without any delays... Which is an online friendship
Katachi Rin holds the handle name RimiRin online was about to have an online meet-up with an online friend she holds dear...
Caring, Kind, and Industrious... this was the image sculpted at her head about that person... But the reality is often disappointing...
P.S: This book is for the Spirity Contest at the genre of Comedy so if you liked It, please support It... This is not Sweet Love... Definitely not
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The story in itself has a very interesting premise, I like it. The take on it is unique for a romance genre. I don't particularly like romance, but this isn't that bad. I don't necessarily like the writing style, I mean for me, I don't like how everything is written in the present time. Despite that though, this story has potential, keep up the good work author!
The story is not bad, i like the very manga-like dialogues and plot. It’s cute and interesting in it own way. Its a refreshing take on the whole romantic dtory thing because the usual stories I’ve read in this category are too dramatic and serious. Overall the story is pretty good, minimal grammatical errors. Keep up the good work author.
The story is still in progress so there shouldn't be a lot to review on. But no, this story definitely deserve a review, a lengthy one at that. So to start off, I like the female lead, her thoughts was realistically portrayed. *nodding head, yep, that's what I would be thinking too if such thing happen to me! The author created her with an introvert-like appearance, but inside she is very expressive. As for the male lead, tsk, truly a scum! Ahem, for now, but we'll see how much of a scum he is going to be...or maybe not. Lol, author your imagination is limitless, but please don't make your female reader hate him (male lead) too much. As for grammatically issues, there is some sentences that needs to be reword and bit of capitalization occurring within sentences, not sure if the author intend for that. But it's not a big deal that needs to be fix right away. In overall, It's very manga-like which is rare for me cause I rather read manga then read text-like manga. But nonetheless this story creates an interesting mood that allows the reader to connect with the female lead, or may be just me, lol. Another thing is I was a bit confuse when she was talking to herself and out of nowhere other characters pop-up which later assume is from her own imagination. I mean you could guess what's going as you read on, but it would be much easier to know that these characters are not physically real...or are they? because while reading through those chapters I thought I was reading a different story. But with that said, this is a good read, and it is heading toward an interesting plot. Keep up the good work, author!
Very well what can I say besides "I LOVE IT" yes I loved every chapter single chapter of this! This was a good read, that reminded me a lot of the good days of watching comedy anime, this as lots of comedy and a very relatable main character (Rin is such a presious treasure that must be protect at all costs). Honestly theres only one down here and it is the lack of more chapters (as of writing this) Honestly I can't wait for more, keep them coming, Author P.S: Thanks to the book cover you have, I want to watch Yahari again
This novel is written for the sweet-tooths. It's gonna make you cringe with sugar. Perfect for those who are bitter. Anyway, though its not my preferred genre. I can see potential in here. A goody read for those who're looking for **** romance. [img=recommend]