The Power of Ice

LV 4

7rox

Brudda, is the Buddha fan fic dropped? 🥲

LV 4

Tarang_Sharma

A guy with ice fruit. He has power of blank so unlimited potential and able to learn anything. He has disease and poison immunity. He is immortal so he can regenerate from anything if his body is destroyed he will reincarnate in a new one. He is also given unlimited stamina and adaptation, indestructible mind too. He is given 3 hakis unlocked from the start. Even with all these he is not even an admiral level in 15 years training. Author gave him unknown weakness of mental strain when using devil fruit power for long. Takes an hour to freeze the front of an island. This is SUPER NERF. Author can't even write without showing that the MC can't do this and has only reached this much power every 4 para. Don't read its also super boring no change in story just the same as one piece too.

LV 1

DaoistElxnbZ

When will you release chapters in this story again? ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 1

GodOfLight

Writing quality : Normal, there are mistakes in grammar, but not often. Chapter updates : Good, 1-2 chapters a day. Story Development : There are too many time skips in the story itself, but mc's powers don't develop, of course a couple things like haki and martial arts have been added, but nothing has changed significantly in these 10 years, he was a weakling and still is. Character Design : Although he is an adult mentally, but behaves like a child, as if with a brain disease and reduced intelligence, too dumb in simple words, also did not like the way he says things like : I will protect your smile, no matter what it costs me, ( did you even read what you wrote ? ). World background : The usual One Piece, but changed a bit and not for the better.

LV 11

Terminator123

I like this fanfiction. very well written. very good story.

LV 14

Thananos

I am rating this a four because I have yet to read it, but the synopsis has made it sound like it's just what was looking for to cure my boredom. I'm even reading it before my 20 chapter minimum.

LV 1

Cevahir_Gezer

Güncelleme aksadı. Lütfen Yeni bölüm yayınlayın.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 3

ShadowTime

i love this book, it drew me in like a moth to the light. ...........,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,','.,'.,'.,''.,'.'.'.'.'.,'.,'..,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,'.,.

LV 15

MadFool

1. Writing quality: Decent with some typos and grammatical errors but nothing major. 2. Updates: So far daily 1-2 chapters so that is nice and frequent. 3. Development: The story is fast paced but it actually works pretty well, atleast in my opinion and while MC has not done anything too extreme, he has caused some significant changes. 4. MC himself: I like the way he is portrayed, dude is chill but has his own drive and critical thinking. 5. Other characters: While they make quite brief appearances, author has fleshed out nicely the supporting cast. 6. World building: I mean, it’s One Piece, 6/5 ofc, as for when Mc leaves the world of One Piece, well that remains to be seen. All in all, I recommend to give this fanfic a shot.

LV 1

Elemise

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