The Orphic Elf

Phanessa Tauriel is a 24-year-old tattoo artist and owner of a bar/tattoo studio called Orphic Edge. She is proud to own such an establishment. Her customers are funny as Hel, and her best friends are the best employees a girl could ask for. Her roommate is a grumpy forest green and gold snake who hates being woken up before Noon. But the thing is, she hides a really big secret. When she was fifteen, she ate a golden apple given to her by an old shop owner in her hometown. After eating the strange-colored apple, her ears became long and pointed, and her light, warm hazel eyes changed to liquid gold. Who would have thought turning into an elf would give her advantages when the world got inducted into the System.
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I don't plan to continue posting this on Webnovel. Instead, I'm considering publishing it on KDP or a similar platform. I'll likely share the first 5,000 words and then remove it. My goal is to gauge the internet's reaction to it. I would appreciate any feedback.
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*The cover is my own work using Midjourney AI*