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The Origin of Dungeons [Dungeon Core]
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One day, Mana resurged on Earth. No System appeared, no Immortals descended and no portals with monsters pouring out showed up. Everything simply started evolving.
In the midst of all this, through a series of coincidences, an unfortunate soul got trapped inside a pile of minerals instead of disappearing. With no one to guide him, he will find his own path of existence, the path of a guide, a creator.
A Dungeon.
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I will also be posting this story on Royal Road, you can check it out at https://www.royalroad.com/profile/497404/fictions
Disclaimer: The cover is made with AI Art, and not by myself.
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No joke. This novel is so good The world building is amazing. The dungeon creating is amazing. 10/10
I came here expecting nothing and recive pure gold... no platine? no dimonds yeah thet's good enough, i've love the sotry so far, the only problem is that is only 55 ch till now, i kinda wanna travel in time to read tho whole story
Honestly I wish there was more I would pay good money for definitely recommend
Excellent story worth a shot. Complete english sentences with paragraphes, good writing style and rare typos. For an ukrainian who might not even be a native english speaker, it’s quite an achievment. The first chapters have more descriptions and inner monologues because it’s a dungeon story, but it soon switch to a better balance with actions and dialogues. Good world building, and great attention from the author to build a consistant magic system bringing enougth originality to stand out compared to generic magic fantasy stories. It’s called ”The origin of dungeons” and explores how such a world came to be. It’s therefor a bit weird how there are some inconsistancies or even contradictions between the actions and the established personality of the MC. It tickles me a bit, but you guys will probably overlook it just fine. I do warn the author that a too apathic MC that turns into just a camera for the readers makes for a boring story tho. An MC needs motivations, drive and agency, else the author will have to cheat too much and pile up the plot armor and coincidencies to push the story forward, turning the MC into a raft without sail pushed and dragged around by the tempest. Overall a great start and i recommend you give it a try.
Its...... actually good? the pacing is neither too slow nor too fast, it makes you feel like time has passed way too quickly, I for some feel like there's some "Evolution begins from a big tree" Vibe and maybe that's why I am being biased (I also adore dungeon mc novels).